Hands

Hands

A Poem by Dhaye (Margaux)
"

for those who came as blessings to others

"
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She got much gifts from open hands
Those golden hearts from foreign land
But though they came from farther place
Their hearts are closer, oh such a grace
~
Somehow it's good to take and keep
Yet there are hands that do not sleep
They are not tired of sharing gifts
Helping others with no buts and ifs
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She loves to see herself like them
Sharing her gifts, her precious gems
Even the gifts she has today
Her skills and talents, that's her bouquet
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And now she finds another dream
Like mending rips from hem to hem
She wants to share her open hands, too
With songs of hope for me and you

© 2017 Dhaye (Margaux)



Author's Note

Dhaye (Margaux)
To my grandparents, aunts and uncles who are so generous to us

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Beautiful and kind words for our elders. We are lucky when wise people show us. Love and kindness is more precious than great wealth.
"And now I find another dream
Like mending rips from hem to hem
I want to share these open hands, too
With song of hope for me and you"'
I love the above lines. Thank you dear friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye (Margaux)

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much for taking time on my page
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

You are welcome dear friend.



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There is such a tender beauty here, in the giving and the loving through these songs of hope and every thread of life. How blessed to have these souls around you.

Posted 1 Year Ago


very nice penning, there are those who give so much of themselves and people never notice or accept. no matter how small the act is it's more than enough, it's love. altruist, UB4ME. thanks for sharing %>)

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Dhaye (Margaux)

1 Year Ago

Thank you for the kind words
You are the blessings to others, dear one. Blessings and your ancestors smile on you and those here and past walk with you all the same. Your gratitude for them blesses you and them, and you do for the ones gone to another slice of this life whisper and subtly affect you and you can bring them along as well, show them things they were meant to learn here that perhaps they missed, as we all miss things in our day to day. Beautiful write dear one.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye (Margaux)

1 Year Ago

Thank you, HS
Such a warm piece. Well written and tells a wonderful story. People with giving spirits are some of the most beautiful people and radiate endless love; this was definitely conveyed in your poem. Thank you for sharing! WONDERFUL!

J

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye (Margaux)

1 Year Ago

Thank you for reading
Jenny

1 Year Ago

youre welcome :)
Beautiful and kind words for our elders. We are lucky when wise people show us. Love and kindness is more precious than great wealth.
"And now I find another dream
Like mending rips from hem to hem
I want to share these open hands, too
With song of hope for me and you"'
I love the above lines. Thank you dear friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye (Margaux)

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much for taking time on my page
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

You are welcome dear friend.

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Added on February 2, 2017
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Dhaye (Margaux)
Dhaye (Margaux)

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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

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