Color Me

Color Me

A Poem by Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
"

Missing something I always wanted to do

"

~

Color me with hues coming from your heart
Touch me gently as you hold your brush
Draw every memory you want to come alive
Put them gently and never do it in a rush

~

Leave traces of your hand all around my frame
Make me your reflection, your soul's looking glass
Feed your spirit with creation you always want
Color me with shades of you, make me your prettiest canvass

~

© 2016 Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)


Author's Note

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
I really miss painting. 😩😩 Paints are so costly plus I can't find time to do it. 😨😨

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' Color me with shades of you, make me your prettiest canvass ' Whether your desire to cover a canvas or another being, this is a sizzling yet gentle comment for and to someone precious, surely.

As always, you've used language in a languid yet colourful manner. Tis beautiful.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, em.



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this is very nice. again thanks for sharing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Beautiful poem, this touched me deeply the feelings behind I your work is stunning. ~R

Posted 6 Years Ago


I love the imagery. I hope the painting is beautiful. They say beauty is in the eye of the beholder. And judging by the sentiments in your lovely poem, I am sure the painting will be extra special.

Posted 7 Years Ago


This a beautiful poem. Very free flowing and True to emotion as it seems. Very enjoyable.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thank you for reading
How I love the vivid hues and vibrant flow of your words, sweet and sensual on the light-lit canvas of you. And dear poet, may you find a way to return to your paintings, if only digitally for awhile.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Someone once said artists walk with the Gods, painting the expression and love. Beautifully told.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much for reading
beautiful!! we all wish to be works of art to people's eyes! you are a work of art w/ this piece and so much more!!! i just started painting 35 years later it's tough but some days you see something beautiful and you capture it w/ a stoke or two. thank you for this

Posted 7 Years Ago


Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thank you for spending time on this piece of writing
' Color me with shades of you, make me your prettiest canvass ' Whether your desire to cover a canvas or another being, this is a sizzling yet gentle comment for and to someone precious, surely.

As always, you've used language in a languid yet colourful manner. Tis beautiful.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, em.
I find this poem really interesting for a few reasons. though they are around I've only seen one or two different poems I can remember That are from the perspective of an object something new though is that it Longs for you to use it for its purpose (Something missing from those others I have read) beautifully executed Dhaye

Posted 7 Years Ago


Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Matthew

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Added on December 28, 2016
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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

Philippines



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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

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