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A Poem by H

"Why?" It was Jane this time. "I-i don't know..." Loki/Jane


Green peered into brown

Her bottom lip was trembling uncontrablly

The weakening conditon was taking over her entire body, this wasnt meant to happen

The god snickered, low and raspy, his emerald cape flowed out behind him

Jane clutched the wall, where was Thor? The love of her life.

Tears welled in her eyes when Loki stepped closer to her

His breath rolled down her neck, it was chilled, not a toasty breeze like Thor's

"Why so afraid?" Mischevious glances flickered through the greens of his eyes

Jane swallowed, a little too deep

"...Thor..." Her voice was squeaky, far from her normal pitch

For a moment, a jealous grimaniced laced his bony face then vanished

Loki's eyebrows scrunched together, "I see you've fallen for him too, like everyone.."

Silence filled the empty space between the two, it was akaward but neither broke it

Jane felt a bit of remorse for the younger brother, to only be half loved when watching your brother gets the world handed to him on a silver platter must be horrid.

With shaky hands, Jane sets one on Loki's armored shoulder

He tenses under the touch but adjusts into it, placing his head in the crook of her neck, absorbing her warmth

"Why?" The question was so juveinile that Loki blushed, yet he couldnt place why he did.

"Because everyone needs someone." Loki teared at Jane's words, how could someone say that, to the God of Mischief?

Loki shifted, his nose barely brushed the tip of Jane's nose, she glanced up in awe, he was beautiful

Both leaned forward until their lips were seconds away from each other.

"why?" It was Jane this time

"I-i dont know.." Loki perseded forward


Both squrimed out of each others arms in shock



© 2011 H

Author's Note

Did this in a hurry so its BAD! haha sorry(: still i love Loki and Jane together(:

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Awww, I wish I was Jane now! Hahaha. But this was beautifully written. Yes, everyone needs someone. Especially someone like Loki!!!

Posted 6 Years Ago

Wow! An interesting twist... another great job. Keep writing! :)

Posted 7 Years Ago

I don't know. Discussion of love with Loki. Could get you in trouble anyway. I like the tale in the poem. Thor is a interesting character also. A excellent poem.

Posted 7 Years Ago

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Added on May 24, 2011
Last Updated on May 26, 2011
Tags: Loki, Jane Foster, Thor, movie, Marvel, comics, crack couples, love, picniks, sun, peace



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