Remnants Of Me

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

REMEMBER ME WHEN.......

 

 

The lemonade sun sparkles its mellon rays

Summer lawns luxuriant with green

Sky coloured blue

Lily-White clouds be adrift

Feathery breezes blows in sweet dreams of love,

we thought would never fade

 

Autumn kisses the earth

Leaves in varicolor array the trees

Soft whispering wind causes them to dance to the ground

The sun sets in a rainbow of vibrant shades

 

Snow embraces the landscape in a wintery bliss

Crisp air mingles with warm breath

Crackling fire burns to ember in a fireplace

Body grows cold, i'm not there to cuddle

Crying wind echos a lost love

 

Spring freshens up nature

Flowers are at their prime

Efforescence buds pop open like umbrellas on a rainy day

Birds whistle a romantic love song

 

Darkness seeks the night

Brilliant colors wither to black

Pregnant moon spills relucent light

Remnants of me won't let you sleep,

that's when you remember the best is in the past

 

 

Reviews

[Kenaz]

Wonderful personification in the descriptions of the seasons. Mellon rays to melancholy. A very enjoyable read.

[imagination101]

Thanks!

[Alicia Schroeder]

Beautiful:)

[imagination101]

Thanks!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good..!!

[cevance]

Rich in imagery. It's very pleasing to the senses.

[Renny]

This is so captivating. I read it and couldn't stop thinking If my Ex ever felt my remnants too LOL. Very emotional. Was close to tears when I finished reading it and I'll read it two times over. Awesome piece Darl....

[willYam PaX]

very beautiful tale and always be remembered.

[Zackery Alan Daley]

I think this poem needs a review from a real critic! (not me) I think it is awesome though, submit it into contests and that is publish material I can tell you that.

[Amila Jay]

Wow! It's wonderful. Great write:)

["jens books".]

great job keep up the great work

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

The use of colors and seasons to express emotions was brilliant.