Red Silken Sheets

Red Silken Sheets

A Poem by KATHY SUE SILLS
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Two lovers!

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     Red hot silken sheets
     Make our flesh come alive
     Entwine our bodies
     Let's taste each other all night
     And when day breaks let's not stop

© 2022 KATHY SUE SILLS


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KATHY SUE SILLS
Tanka Poem

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Good work. Loved that night you sang.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Hi Kathy, tanka and haiku poetry is new for me today 26th August 2023. One being 3 lines and the other 5. I get mixed up with the syllables. But a nice read. Concise!

Posted 8 Months Ago


Syllables of lust you write
Keeps the reader up all night

I think the sheets are about to combust!!

Posted 1 Year Ago


love the picture and your words do echo this. Why stop passion when it grasps you into a sensual frenzy. I like the idea of continuing the scene into the daylight, why not?
Nicely crafted.
Best, B

Posted 1 Year Ago


All night love is for the young... I can still remember it! lol! As you get older, friendship becomes more important than sex, but it's nice to remember when! A sensual and racy poem!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Plenty of red hot thinking here. Nothing like a good love in. Thanks Kathy.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


KATHY SUE SILLS

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Chris!
Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

You are welcome :)
Clever poem...not sure how Tanka poetry works..but I did really like it and the red image..
so good...
Lisa, now in Spain

Posted 1 Year Ago


KATHY SUE SILLS

1 Year Ago

Thank you for stopping by!
Lisasview

1 Year Ago

My pleasure..
Look forward to reading your thoughts on one of my poems...you might like my ne.. read more
I used to get "entwined"---
such a good feeling...and not stopping at day break....
love has no clock.
j.

Posted 2 Years Ago


KATHY SUE SILLS

1 Year Ago

Thank you for stopping by!
Very steamy my dear, Kathy. Great choice of words to make this short piece have such a strong affect. Similar to my "Delight". "Entwine our bodies, Let's taste each other all night". My favorite lines. Thank you for posting. Temperance

Posted 2 Years Ago


KATHY SUE SILLS

1 Year Ago

Thank you!
This poem is fueled with energy and sparks if youth, and passion.

Posted 2 Years Ago


KATHY SUE SILLS

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Cherrie!

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Added on May 16, 2022
Last Updated on May 16, 2022
Tags: Love, Together, Bodies, Sex

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KATHY SUE SILLS
KATHY SUE SILLS

Harrisville, MS



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