Moon song

Written for the 4 line poetry contest

 

 

 

 

 

Moon Song

 

 

Day turns to night as the moon it starts singing

Neath tiny stars like a prism it glows

Sweet are the songs every moon beam is bringing

Sit here with me and we'll take in the show 

Author's Note

Written for the 4 line poetry contest

Reviews

[Zahra]

Beautiful description in four lines. A really delightful poem.

[Emerald Seas]

Beautifully voiced! Imagery unfolds with a picture perfect scene as I read this short piece.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Sera. Happy you enjoyed it.

[TL Boehm]

light and pretty. I'm never done in four lines. Which is not a good thing.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much for your always and abundant kind words to me. I am floating as we speak.

[s y e]

Wow, absolutely gorgeous s always, Jack. It's short but straight to the point, loved it!!

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my sweet friend. How are the exams or finals going?

[s y e]

They're okay, I'm studying hard trying to get through them.... Got Biology soon, thanks for asking!

[Jack...]

I hated biology but then I think it was the teacher not the subject

[s y e]

I hate it altogether. My teachers is daft but tries to make it fun, ha

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Such beauty in four lines...your imagery is exquisite. I love the first and fourth lines the most.

[Jack...]

Thank you Sarah. You kind words always mean a lot to me. I find you such a fantastic poet, and when you enjoy my work it makes me smile.

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Oh, I am so glad you think that of me, though I'm on a bit of a un-confident pendulum swing right now in terms of my "talent", so your words make me smile.

[Jack...]

Well if the wonderful poetry I have read lately is a result of the pendulum swinging to the side of doubt, then I truly can not wait until it returns to the confident side.

[Angi]

Congratulations on 2nd place! Beautiful!

[Jack...]

Thank you Angi

[Kristin Lee]

Remeincent of fairtales. I find it enchanting how your've taken something typically dark and turned into something light. Beautiful imagery. I picture sprites and creatures of the night luring me into a forest to sit around a campfire and gaze up at the stars...minus my brother trying to convince me that there are scary creatures out to steal the souls of little kids, lol.

[Jack...]

That's funny. Thanks for the laugh this morning and the kind words.

[shivohumsohum]

The sweet strains escaping from the fragile body of that voilin graced the fretboard with fingers delicate of the maiden charming miss moonshine
and you are floating in a dream lucid a hallucination inducing magic mushroom though bitter it may matter little when you land on airport Luna.

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much

[shivohumsohum]

all is well

[Frieda P]

Like an enchanted dream Jack, love that pic too. Good luck.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Frieda.

[icelandicblue]

I thought I had commented on this already. It's really quite beautiful and the picture is also. It adds an almost haunting effect to everything. Nicely done.

[Jack...]

I thought I had replied to this comment yesterday...honestly. This is like deja vu. Thanks so much blue.