Wonder

I sometimes look at the wind

and wonder

if it is laughing at us.

Our foolishness

our emotions

Sometimes I wonder 

if the wind is crying for us

unable to truly recognize beauty,

stuck in all these stereotypes 

and bombarded with lies

and manipulation

Unable to accept who we are

Sometimes I wonder

what it would be like

to melt into the wind

and dissapear

Reviews

[mattavelli]

This is great. I'd like to be able to melt into the wind. Thanks for sharing.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!!
so lovely........
true......we know nothing about it's thoughts........lucky invisible wind.
simple serene fluid write......
i loved it!!!
:)

[KanaDream]

I really like this. By using something so simple and invisible as the wind you really bring across a mystical third person view on humans as a whole. I loved the ending also. It feels so peaceful.

Keep Dreaming ^^

[Thomas Edward 'Timothy'..]

I grinned at your first few lines, lovely little poem.