" on the canvas of water"

just sitting by the river side and witnessing the photographic abilities of nature.........water thats life to water as a canvas..........a vivid imagination

The surface of life acting as a canvas

the splendor of creation as its guest

witnessed by the magnificent of all

a view to be magnified by the soul

unaware of the submerged divinity

acting as puppets to its hallucination

what a refreshment to the non-corrosive!

what a gaze for the predators so called

a sudden shock of this realisation

only a blink of the eyes, its time span

i stand as a passerby to its existence

it disappears like a comet in the sky!!!!!!!!!

Junaid altaf

Author's Note

simply!
immersed into the view and then came up with this!!!!!!
would be pleased to hear ur response...........

Reviews

[Helena]

Oh beautifully written. The analogy was stunning. Top marks!

Helena

[junaid altaf]

thanks helena.

[Jazmin-Monae]

This is a very beautiful poem! I love the flow of this piece. :)

[junaid altaf]

thanks

[Toni]

This is simply beautiful.
(:

[junaid altaf]

thanks nette

[Toni]

(: Anytime

[junaid altaf]

thanks cutie!

[Toni]

Hehe, I love your work, anytime (:

[junaid altaf]

keep on doin that......it will prove to be oxygen to the fire!

[Toni]

Oh, hehe. I see what you did there.

[junaid altaf]

a lot is in store!

[Toni]

(:
Good (:

[Sugar Plum ♥]

I love the way you desrcibe the time...It`s one of the hardest things to be cought and painted in a poem...Amazing, beautiful poem!
{nour}

[junaid altaf]

thank u snowy!

[WingsToFly]

wonderful. Thanks for sharing

[junaid altaf]

thank u

[Moniba]

Woah. Amazing poetry.

[junaid altaf]

thanks moniba

[Mark]

The natural things in life, such as water , sky, wind, rain, what have you, can be such an inspiration to draw upon. You've managed to do just that, and quite well

[junaid altaf]

thanks mark,,,,,,,,

[Mark]

You're welcome.

[Em]

Great piece!

[junaid altaf]

thanks

[beyondpen]

its amazing how we get the deepest of the ideas enjoying nature ... great wrote yet again :)

[junaid altaf]

thank you friend

[lee von cleef]

The moment, gives as you take ,and in the thought the light sees in you....be responsible with the gift....



or the negative humanity thought...a drone strike on the oasis.

[junaid altaf]

thanks for the words of wisdom