You're Difficult to Understand

I kept this one for a long time and I'm finally over it!

You're Difficult to Understand

I always thought you're demented
I always thought you're obsessed
I never thought of how you feel
And I never thought it would be this hard.
Why are you acting like this?
You are lucky to be handled
You're lucky because we care
But you're difficult to Understand

We've given you advice to help yourself
Because you alone can only fix this
But you left it and gone your own way
Your mother and father began to loathe you
and you're being oblivious with your vicinity
The man deceived you
And yet you're there to care for him
How do you handle this demeanor of yours?

We all know that you're modest and smart
But you're being conceited about him
What has the boy done to you?
You're being stagy and all!
You begin to loathe me behind my back
And I also felt the same way
But bickering won't save the problem
I'm not the only one who cared for you
You know deep within your heart
Even though you abhor me and all
I still care about you!

Always remember we're here to help and emend
Though we knew this will be hard
Because you're difficult to Understand.

Author's Note

Ignore wrong typo's and grammars..
Reviews would be very much appreciated!
thanks!

Reviews

[Kathryn]

I love it :) There are a few grammar mistakes, but (as you asked for those not to be mentioned anyway) I only mention them because they acctually add to the piece. There is something about the half-sentances that adds more mystery than perfect grammar could ever hope to achieve. Beautiful work, well

[realmwriter]

Is it a benevolant reasoning behind the write or a love of the subject of the poem? Perhaps it is a way of reaching out to the subject! Whatever the reason Im sure it is well intentioned, though if this were about me it would only push me further away!

[Richard Williams]

A good poem exploring those ambivalent emotions.

This is a really great write, it flows excellently. The final stanza really made it all work together, it would be completely different without those final three lines.
Thanks for sharing

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A true and prized piece, well done, great read.

[kdpgrahi]

I love it and appreciate your poetic feelings. Hope you continue your good works

[Sunflower 20]

well done! i especially liked the strong finish, nice :)

[∂αʌ<..]

oh...i was once in a fix with someone--kind of hard to decipher...likewise im just an open book!
a great write!

[Tasha]

Excellent expression of these words. It is hard when you don't understand someone. Great flow and terrific job.

[Ashley]

i hate when its difficult to understand someone. but it happens. nice flow. 100

[light and ashes]

I love this! It is phanominal!