Wishing on Stars

Stardust blinds me and feels sublime

 

Wishing on Stars

Yinseriv

It is one of those quiet mornings.

My mind is at ease.

My soul is calm.

I sit here in this space living this moment.

Gazing at the moon and stars I feel a pulse beat in and around me.

Nothing insistent.

It isn't a call or an answer.

It just is.

So I start to wish upon stars.

One wish for each star.

Here is a wish.

I wish we all find that one star.

The star we can pin our hopes on.

The star that can guide us through the dead of night.

I wish that our individual fears dim by the light of our star.

I wish that our souls shine brighter and our faces become radiant bathed in this light.

I wish that the dance I perform in this moment will become a glide upon stardust.

I wish my steps would trail stardust all the day long.

I wish that the stardust is transferred to you as our paths cross.

Would we then be star crossed lovers?

But for now I don't feel alone.

I am wishing upon stars. 

Reviews

[Butch Decatoria]

A wish is but a yearning, a deep desire to come true, and once made - it begins to come to fruition (for the soul will find a way to get it's food). You hold many wishes, yet it seems in the piece - you are laid back and non-commital, enjoying just the moment - the here and now... good write.

Thanks for sharing, and reviewing mine.

~Pfluffer

[G]

It was going good until we became lovers and you started passing me drugs(stardust)....lol. Peaceful and tranquil, I wish I had that kind of compassion. I can see me sitting and for a moment I am in my quiet place.

[Adela Muresan]

Wow, it's great.
The imagery carries the reader there :). I like the last three verses, especially the one with the star-crossed lovers.

A.M.

[Dizzy-Izzy]

"When your heart is in your dreams...
No request is too extreme...
When you wish upon a star... Like dreamers do..." - Jiminy Cricket

This is lovely

Thanks

[Seriana]

I LOVE wishing, and to do it on stars, well....you've captured a beautiful moment of solitude. I love the fluid motion of this piece. It's almost surreal. Quite lovely!

VC5

[Damian Alan Gray]

This is beautifully serene, my friend. Not once do you overstep the boundaries of meditative cognizance, or burst the proverbial bubbles of tranquility. Outstanding write!

[J. James Reider]

This piece took my mind to peaceful places. It is a very solid piece and it was a joy to read. Very tranquil yet subtly mind bending. A very wonderful poem (:

[Becca]

The entire piece shimmers with beauty.
Well done

[HoorayForUnderdog]

absolutely beautiful...the mood you set in this poem is sublime...your writing shines through as bright as those morning stars you speak of
jenny

[Lia]

Beautiful piece, I really love your work..you're a very good writer. Thanks xx