Under my broken wing

Draw close
Differences in the past

Only wanted to help

Never to fly again

Still do my best

Fallen

Despite the pain

Give you shelter

     under my broken wing

Reviews

[.]

~ oh...i know the truth in these words...i fly with my broken but mended wings...superbly written and expressed...

[Jon Roggie]

As always, thank you. Trying to get the thought out there.

[.]

~ you're very welcome, monsieur...

[Tex]

oh this is very good... despite being broken still willing to help a friend. Very nice message and very well written. Just loved this write.

[Jon Roggie]

Thank you, Nicholas. Trying to put words to action.

[Tex]

loved this remarkable write.

[Grant P.]

You explain a lot in just a short poem, saying that someone can come to you despite who both of you are.

[Jon Roggie]

Thank you. I use more words in responses than in my writing it seems. Hope you liked it.