Broken Beyond Repair

Another poem about a girl thats bullied. I don't know why but I've written a lot of bully related poems...

You'd never guess how many tears,

Fell out of those sparkley blue eyes.

You'd never noticed when her smile widens,

She is dying each time inside.

You'd never think when she pushes you away,

She just wants you closer.

You'd never believe that cheery voice,

Gets higher when she's sadder.

 

No one thought she was slowly,

Inching toward the edge.

No one thought,

Her troubles would never fade.

They talked about her,

Never thinking she would know.

No one really knew,

What words could ever do.

 

She never believed that,

Love could actually exist.

She thought that when its not spoken,

It's not there.

She pushed away topics,

That she never wanted to touch.

Silently hoping,

You'd push harder,

To know you actually care.

 

They say she's just throwing a pity party,

That she just wants attention.

She only wants people to look away,

Or for once listen.

The only reason she complains,

Is because it's been building up inside,

Boiling in her heart for months at a time.

They pushed her away,

Said she's annoying and weird.

They ignored her silent pleas,

Her craving for love.

They pronounced her as clingy,

Always hanging over you.

That's only because shes lonely,

She wants people to know shes there for them.

 

She didn't like the questions,

Ignored the prying eyes.

She just wanted them to listen,

But somehow she just felt worse.

They never really cared,

About how she felt,

They just look for insecurities,

And cut open healing scars.

Reviews

[Hana Linzi]

I TRULY UNDERSTAND THIS POEM. I FELT THE PAIN THE POEM WAS SAYING. IVE BEEN THROUGH THAT!! HOPE YOU KEEP IT UP!!

[patricia]

this has great depth and understanding. composed with heart.

[Barbara Walker]

Very descriptive, all lines ring with truth, but I found the last two lines to be very powerful and true.

[silver threaded queen]

beautiful writing, love the way you describe things, the atmosphere you build with your words. can't wait to read more from you!

[Cathy Wattam]

Sad poem, but nicely written. I can see a lot of thought has gone into this. It rings true and is quite thought-provoking. Maybe you have a message for the bullies of the world..............