Afterlife

Afterlife

A Poem by Kevin Andros
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This is another lyrics for our band.

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Somedays are just like the same,
somedays are totally different,
somethings are straight out of the frame,
sometimes things are just cold.

Somewhere time tries to slow down,
someone cries out loud,
sometimes the time flies downtown,
but somethings are just cold.

When you broke my heart, as you walk away,
as you woke me up, from my dreams,
before the silence could, touch the evil sky,
moved away from reality it seemed.

My life's a dead end,
no where to go,
but when I look at you,
you always been cold,
Things have changed,
yet somehow they still are same,
time has flown away,
but for me it still the same.

Yet you are still cold for me,
you are cold for me (x2)

Somewhat things are different now,
somehow they still are same,
somewhere time's catching up,
but somehow you still are cold

Somethings ya'll wish you want to,
somehow you know you can't do,
there are things you wanna change
but somethings are just cold

Struggling and rolling on in my path
hoping to go through the end,
bruised and beaten now I won't be same again,
I won't be same again!

My life's a dead end,
no where to go,
but when I look at you,
you always been cold,
Things have changed,
yet somehow they still are same,
time has flown away,
but for me it still the same.


Yet you are still cold for me,
you are cold for me (x2)


As the sun sets,
and the day ends,
as I meet the End,
I'll see you again (x4)

But for me it still the ....

My life's a dead end,
no where to go,
but when I look at you,
you always been cold,
Things have changed,
yet somehow they still are same,
time has flown away,
but for me it still the same.


Yet you are still cold for me,
you are cold for me (x4)

But for me it still is the same (x2)



Check out the Lyrical video and get a feel of the song here:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yaEfdqM37iQ

© 2016 Kevin Andros



Author's Note

Kevin Andros
This is the recently completed song for our band.

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Wow! That was a one very strong piece.
I have to say, that when I started it...I found it a little random and abstract. But, gradually as soon as I reached by the end, it totally started to make sense and I figured out what were you trying to say in the beginning.
My favorite lines has to be-
"When you broke my heart as you walk away,
As you woke me up from my dreams, " - I loved the metaphor in these lines, of waking up from a dream after a heartbreak..when we are in love, everything appears like a dream and then just like any dream we came up from it again into the world of reality.
I also equally loved the last section, since it concluded the poem very well.
It was very heartbreaking yet true that after when you would reach to your end,you will meet her once again..So majestic and beautifully written.
I can also totally imagine as a song too. Great work..keep it up :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Amazing! :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


This was amazing!!!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow! That was a one very strong piece.
I have to say, that when I started it...I found it a little random and abstract. But, gradually as soon as I reached by the end, it totally started to make sense and I figured out what were you trying to say in the beginning.
My favorite lines has to be-
"When you broke my heart as you walk away,
As you woke me up from my dreams, " - I loved the metaphor in these lines, of waking up from a dream after a heartbreak..when we are in love, everything appears like a dream and then just like any dream we came up from it again into the world of reality.
I also equally loved the last section, since it concluded the poem very well.
It was very heartbreaking yet true that after when you would reach to your end,you will meet her once again..So majestic and beautifully written.
I can also totally imagine as a song too. Great work..keep it up :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 13, 2009
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Hi. I'm a Leo Person by birth. ************************ Update April 2016 I am making my slow return to this wonderful world without borders. Trying to be active on boards and adding new writer.. more..

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