Dearly Beloved

Dearly Beloved,
Why yes, I am covered in crimson. Blood is such a passion red, no need for it to stay inside. 
Answers are accumulated throughout the hall. Narrow pathways, come one come all.
Witness the final breath! Look at the success!
That blessed neck was easy to snap.
Did you hear that, the final crack?
Tip toeing around them, ‘tis very loud. 

Someone calls out in the distant crowd, “I'm a guard! Nothing to see here!” 

“Hmm. Darlings, now there is no need to be bombarded on the origin of this all.” Walks away the host.
“No, sir I can’t recall.” One claimed as the investigation pursued.
Don’t fall off the bed beloved, for you may be risking it all. One peep from you, I’ll be there in a jiffy. Sorry, you’ll be missed by many.

Reviews

[Confuser]

Kenna: I adore it...the beginning to the bloody stained end...Just marvelous. Such an intriguing write and have no doubt you'll achieve your goal of becoming an outstanding author. A mystery tour stoked with visual fire...the crimson shone on my face...hit me right between the eyes! Bravo! Dearly Beloved...bye, bye. Thanks: Dale

[Insight "MH"]

I love the whole poem, but the first two lines are the ones that I love the most.

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice use of the language. The closing lines made me want to read more.
"Don’t fall off the bed beloved, for you may be risking it all. One peep from you, I’ll be there in a jiffy. Sorry, you’ll be missed by many."
Strong statements crazy wild visions. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!!!
awesome
yet again dark and powerful........which i love the most......
enigmatic words..........strong imagery........
you got it all here......you have the talent!!!
beautiful poem......
i loved it!!!
:)

[Joshua Carl Cruz]

DeaRLY bELOVed,
I am covered in crimson.
Blood is such a passionate color of red
there is no need for it to stay inside.
The answers accumulate throughout
the hall. Narrow passageways, come
one come all! Witness the final breath!
Look at the success! That blessed neck
was easy to snap. Did you hear the crack?
Tip toeing around them, 'tis very loud
Someone calling to me from the crowd,
"See here! I'm a guard! There's nothing to see!"
and at this point ive buried the meaning of your poem somewhere I can't see but I took the time to do this for your opinion. What do you think? What is your poems intention? I hope I helped or if not help me. Tell me why it works or doesn't for you lese. Thanks for letting me read.

[Emily]

Vary well written!
Well done!

[Divya]

Work is rhyming but I didnt got meaning after it.

[wordman]

a woman scorned,hell to pay
great write