Dream India

Dream India

A Poem by Riddhi
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This poem i wrote for my dearest motherland. This is my dream about how my nation should be.......

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What dreams  were seen
By freedom fighters for our nation?
All of us know although
They are nowhere mentioned.
Some of them were of a corruption-free
And an Independent nation,
But do you think with present India
They have any relation?
Britishers have definitely gone,
But because of corrupt politicians
We are still to mourn.
Why only the government is put to blame?
We are also having our share in it the same.
Have not we somewhere
 Forgotten our duty as citizens?
To be loyal and never give any bribe
Or take any bribe.
Come on, let us take an oath
To follow our duty as a citizen,
Then only we can make
Dream India as our nation.................

© 2015 Riddhi



Author's Note

Riddhi
This is my dream , a 15-yr-old girl's dream , about how my country should be. I am sure that if we all follow our every duty as citizen as described in the poem above the definitely dream India can become each one's nation.

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The page does overflow with a young woman's passion strong, confirmed in old blood and in new ink

I hope the day shall come when dream India becomes a waking reality.... N

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Riddhi

3 Weeks Ago

I also hope so...Thanks for your review...You always write such kind of reviews for my ppem that enc.. read more
Neville Pettitt

3 Weeks Ago

no problem, my pleasure...
We have a long way to go but there’s great will I see here and that will multiplied by a billion such will surely pave the way! Great poem, Riddhi!

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Riddhi

3 Weeks Ago

Thanks for your review Divya...
DIVYA

3 Weeks Ago

You are most welcome, dear Riddhi!
Being an Indian I must say you did tremendous job in this small age. You could relate the corruption issue so well,,you truly said despite blaming govt. We must take initiative ....india does need more people like you my dear. Great job!!
Love
Sneh

Posted 2 Months Ago


Riddhi

2 Months Ago

I wrote this 2 years ago when i was 15 and i posted it then here..Now i am 17 and I am so happy that.. read more
Sneh

2 Months Ago

Good things are appreciated lifetime! :D
I love your poem & it's such a good idea, I feel like writing a similar poem, as a song of hope for the USA. We are wracked by corruption ever since Trump came into office. I believe there is a movement around the world that's bringing in politicians that really don't care about "the people" even tho they say they do. You are exactly right about the antidote -- we citizens must participate! Democracy is hard work! We must be part of the solution. I love that you're so aware at such a young age. It gives me hope for the future, as many young people here are also getting involved (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 2 Months Ago


Riddhi

2 Months Ago

Thank you..I am really happy that you liked this poem..
Nice write, hope is definitely a good thing. Enjoyed it.
-GS

Posted 6 Months Ago


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Riddhi

2 Months Ago

Thank you..
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Zoe
Very well rhymed and written! It feels really great to know that the younger generation is so devoted to their country.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Riddhi

1 Year Ago

Thank you....
Oh, Riddhi!
How brilliantly hopeful and inspirational this marvelous poem is for you, your fellow-citizens, and your country as a whole, and what an enthrallingly idealistic dream for all to follow ⁓ you've swelled my heart.
I admire how you laid your rhymes in just the right places to keep smoothness flowing and the mind captivated from beginning to the final nance of continuing your dream for all … how exciting!
Your poem is so powerful it can reach into the core of all nations to help make them shine across the globe.

You are a wonderful poetess with a truly loving, caring heart and soul … warmest hugs and many blessings to you, Riddhi! ⁓ Richard

Posted 2 Years Ago


Riddhi

2 Years Ago

Oh!! thanks for your kind words...
Richard

2 Years Ago

My brightest admiration to you! ✨
Riddhi

2 Years Ago

Thank you...
Great work...I appreciate your effort..but the main problem of our country is that corruption spreads like viral..which seems to be dangerous...in my context our whole committee of politicians should be the youth..that would bring change for sure...mera BHARAT mahan...:):)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Riddhi

2 Years Ago

Yes , i also agree with you that the youth of our country should be politicians...
Thanks for.. read more
horizon

2 Years Ago

My pleasure Riddhi
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mou
It is wonderful!
A very good message is blown here!
True, first we have to stop of handling the blame within each other and look into our own step toward the country.
It is quite inspiring!!Keep it up
Many thanks for sharing :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Riddhi

2 Years Ago

Thanks for your sweet words....i am happy that you liked it...
Great insight into a place of wonder for me, still learning the culture.
I love this dream, and wish it was a virus to be caught by other countries.

Thanks for the share.

Posted 2 Years Ago



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