Dream India

Dream India

A Poem by riddhi
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This poem i wrote for my dearest motherland. This is my dream about how my nation should be.......

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What dreams  were seen
By freedom fighters for our nation?
All of us know although
They are nowhere mentioned.
Some of them were of a corruption-free
And an Independent nation,
But do you think with present India
They have any relation?
Britishers have definitely gone,
But because of corrupt politicians
We are still to mourn.
Why only the government is put to blame?
We are also having our share in it the same.
Have not we somewhere
 Forgotten our duty as citizens?
To be loyal and never give any bribe
Or take any bribe.
Come on, let us take an oath
To follow our duty as a citizen,
Then only we can make
Dream India as our nation.................

© 2015 riddhi



Author's Note

riddhi
This is my dream , a 15-yr-old girl's dream , about how my country should be. I am sure that if we all follow our every duty as citizen as described in the poem above the definitely dream India can become each one's nation.

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Zoe
Very well rhymed and written! It feels really great to know that the younger generation is so devoted to their country.

Posted 10 Months Ago


riddhi

9 Months Ago

Thank you....
Oh, Riddhi!
How brilliantly hopeful and inspirational this marvelous poem is for you, your fellow-citizens, and your country as a whole, and what an enthrallingly idealistic dream for all to follow ⁓ you've swelled my heart.
I admire how you laid your rhymes in just the right places to keep smoothness flowing and the mind captivated from beginning to the final nance of continuing your dream for all … how exciting!
Your poem is so powerful it can reach into the core of all nations to help make them shine across the globe.

You are a wonderful poetess with a truly loving, caring heart and soul … warmest hugs and many blessings to you, Riddhi! ⁓ Richard

Posted 1 Year Ago


riddhi

1 Year Ago

Oh!! thanks for your kind words...
Richard

1 Year Ago

My brightest admiration to you! ✨
riddhi

1 Year Ago

Thank you...
Great work...I appreciate your effort..but the main problem of our country is that corruption spreads like viral..which seems to be dangerous...in my context our whole committee of politicians should be the youth..that would bring change for sure...mera BHARAT mahan...:):)

Posted 1 Year Ago


riddhi

1 Year Ago

Yes , i also agree with you that the youth of our country should be politicians...
Thanks for.. read more
horizon

1 Year Ago

My pleasure Riddhi
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mou
It is wonderful!
A very good message is blown here!
True, first we have to stop of handling the blame within each other and look into our own step toward the country.
It is quite inspiring!!Keep it up
Many thanks for sharing :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


riddhi

1 Year Ago

Thanks for your sweet words....i am happy that you liked it...
Great insight into a place of wonder for me, still learning the culture.
I love this dream, and wish it was a virus to be caught by other countries.

Thanks for the share.

Posted 1 Year Ago


You are absolutely right..we the citizen of country are equally responsible for wrong deeds ruining the roots. Nice piece. Thanks for sharing

Posted 1 Year Ago


great start Riddhi.........
i really appreciate your mature thoughts............we must stop the blame game......and as an individual, each, take collective action.........
very well done.......
i liked it!!!
:)

Posted 1 Year Ago


riddhi

1 Year Ago

Thanks for reviewing...i am really happy that you liked it....
Riddhi, your poem echo's the plea's of many nations. The poor and working class usually set the bar for the moral structure of a nation. Poets as yourself can bring a fresh pure innocence through your dreams and words. You are a blessing to India and its beautiful people. Many Blessings, Richie B.

Posted 1 Year Ago


riddhi

1 Year Ago

Thanks for reviewing...I really appreciate it....
Motivating poem.. Keep on writing.. :D

Posted 1 Year Ago


riddhi

1 Year Ago

Thanks for reviewing...
This poem of yours is a master stroke. Nice writing about Dream India. You poke everything that are sensitive issues of India & you dare to poke through your this poem.
Nice thoughts & well arrangement.
Keep it up!
Your future is bright no doubt.
All the best for your journey.
Write poems and poets like this for us.


Posted 1 Year Ago


riddhi

1 Year Ago

Thanks for your Kind words..I really appreciate it...
Akki

1 Year Ago

Now I am tired to say welcome to you... lol zzz
But, you really good in poem so pleasure is a.. read more

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