Rise up Rise up!!!!

Rise up Rise up!!!!

A Poem by Riddhi
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A poem from the core of my heart

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Time comes when you just cry and cry ,
At that time you should tell yourself to again and again try.
Every diamond was earlier a coal ,
Do not limit yourself to just one role.


Rise up, rise up whenever you fall ,
those who demoralize you, you have to show them all.


when everything you possess ,
life appears like a bed of roses.
you have everyone as your friend ,
and happiness becomes your trend.


But when you are enveloped by problems,
you understand that on this bed of life there are more thorns than petals.
fair - weather friends are discovered.
true friends are the one who always cared.

Every dusk is followed by a dawn ,
Every autumn is followed by a spring.
Thus every failure is followed by success.

Courage is not to be shown ,
when it is easy to show.
Brave is not the one who moves from light to light ,
but the one who moves from dark to light.

Rise up , Rise up whenever you fall
Those who demoralize you , you have to show them all !!!!!!!




© 2016 Riddhi



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Riddhi
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rise up,and never give up

Posted 4 Days Ago


Riddhi

3 Days Ago

Hmm..Thanks for your review..
 wordman

3 Days Ago

you`re welcome
Always look on the bright side...negativity sucks............. more positivity in a poem would be very hard to find... nice one ... Neville

Posted 2 Months Ago


Riddhi

2 Months Ago

Thank you Neville..You are correct in saying negativity sucks..We all should try to be positive in o.. read more
Neville Pettitt

2 Months Ago

I am positively delighted & twas my pleasure... N
I love the lines "Courage is not to be shown, / when it is easy to show." So beautiful. I love your wording. Keep up the great work:)

Posted 4 Months Ago


Riddhi

4 Months Ago

Thank you..I am happy that you liked it..
Your poem is an uplifting message that’s well-balanced between expressing real-life & yet also showing many of your ideas using metaphors from nature. Sometimes a poem like this can sound a little hollow to a person who is feeling down. Lots of times, people who are feeling down will think – this is easy for you to say, becuz you are not near-suicidal. Lots of people in a bleak state of mind do not want to have someone telling them to cheer up. If they could cheer up, they would! So, with all that understood, I feel your poem is as sincere as any uplifting poem could possibly be & that’s why your poem doesn’t feel at all offensive when you tell people to stand up & get tough & be in the fight. There’s a perfect balance to your message, so that it doesn’t come across in a superficial “rah! rah!” way. I can feel your depth of sincerity (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Months Ago


Riddhi

5 Months Ago

Actually few days back I was also in the same state, I didn't want to live but I used to read this p.. read more
barleygirl

5 Months Ago

Life can be a struggle . . . I'm glad you're feeling better!
Beautifully expressed and so heartfelt.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Riddhi

5 Months Ago

Thank you maasi..
Lovely use of words, rhyme scheme firmly placed. Very motivational and simple to understand. Effective in every sense of the word.


Posted 5 Months Ago


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Riddhi

5 Months Ago

Thank you..I am glad that you liked it..
It may be hard and it may seem impossible but take that leap. Jump as far as you can. If you fail, don't lose hope. Even if you fail one time or a hundred times, all you need is that one time where you didn't fail and you succeeded. You only need one "Yes" in a sea full of "No's". Don't lose hope.

Amazing!

Posted 5 Months Ago


Riddhi

5 Months Ago

Thank you..Actually I am waiting for that one yes in a sea full of no's but I don't know when I will.. read more
Written beautifully and every verse has meaning behind it which supports to the main idea of the whole poem. No fluff added.

Inspirational Poems Contest

--Alina The Cacti

Posted 10 Months Ago


Riddhi

10 Months Ago

Thank you...
"Every diamond was earlier a coal." I like the fact that the diamond message has been used a lot by many yet you made it beautiful that I felt the message of it in new way. The whole poem was inspiring and heart felting.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Riddhi

11 Months Ago

Thank you...If you wish you can try reviewing my ither writings too...Thanks again for your review..
Riddhi

11 Months Ago

Sorry by mistake i wrote ither i meant other
Wow... So empowering! I absolutely loved it. It is so well written! Beautiful! The examples you have given are just so creative.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Riddhi

11 Months Ago

Thanks Anjali..if you wish you can review my other writings also...Thanks again for your review...
Anjali

11 Months Ago

Sure! You are welcome!!

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