crooked

there's one thing I have in mind,
that have always makes me sighed,
why does the world never so kind?
that it let my heart bled until it died. . .
never had the chance to unwind,
happenings agreed to coincide,
so much pain in soul had already signed,
but still truth had left denied. . .
or is it me that is too blind?
that's why I never got tired?

Reviews

[Abysmal Savant]

interesting. the line: why is the world never so kind, that it let my heart bleed until it died. thats profound questioning right there. we go through life suffering so much at times then to have time heal our wounds while we collect another, the thought of letting it all go so you simply dont have to hurt like that anymore becomes a comfort of sorts. i can see why one could long for a bleeding heart to finish bleeding completely so the pain would cease. great work poet-

[joshua deathdealer]

Brilliant write...xx

[sarah]

Common thoughts great write!

[NightShade]

The thoughts behind this are incalculably vast in their implications. I gotta say, "happenings agreed to coincide," is my favourite line. This is all around a thinker of a piece. Good stuff!

[leinahtan]

brilliant. :)

[Alexander Mccarthey]

you're portraying some really deep ideas in this poem and I love what its saying.

[nicolo]

makes make think about my work :)ahahahah