Lucas Wave

Hidden
In
The Open
It Is There For
Eyes That Can See, Minds That Know
Ears That Are Extended To Hear That High Pitch
This Bloodhound Is In Tune With The Hidden Forces That Guide The Universe
So Much So That This Creature Analyzes
Every Speck That Can Be
Sighted Or Heard
Tasted or
Touch'd
Senses
Guide Us
On
The Path To
Mental Greatness
And Maybe That Great Leap Up
Upward And Outward, A Chromosonal Jump
An Evolutionary Lift Onto A Higher Plane Of Existence
We Are The Capable Ones, Able To Kill
Off The Cain That Lives Within
Ourselves, The Shells
Breed Away
The
Toxic

Reviews

[Chris]

This one held me til the last three lines...

[Nobody.]

I love this, but who decides what's toxic? ;)

great piece bro....another hopeful undertone I detect.

liking these a lot.

Cheers!

[Abysmal Savant]

after reading this im convinced to look deeper into your pages. kinda reminds me of how a poet approaches evaluating their subjects. The Cain line makes me think your pushing higher learning and thought processes rather than supporting simple carnal instinct- the toxic being the primitive mind- could be wrong but this is what i gather- its tight

[Tate Morgan]

I hope you are right and we breed out the bad

[Robin]

you know the math ... and the language

[Tkess]

46 & 2 just ahead of me, oh sorry. Very reminiscent of the ideas found in many Tool songs like Parabola, 46 & 2, Lateralus, etc or the works of Melchizedek. This desire for something greater then ourselves. Push the envelope, watch it bend.

[Ruth]

Holy (beeeeeeepppppppppppp) LOL Hon...this is so you and so blooming epic! I run lout words but know this...your work ROCKS! Blistering!
xx

[Marie Harrison]

When I read this poem I can't help but think of
George Lucas and his films
to me these are descriptions
that you would see in his
films Fabulous poem

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

I see one who is VERY aware of what is going on around him.......that would be you.

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

Nice! I hope Humankind can catch that wave.Great words, great shape.