Underdog

We never give up do we?

Burst of colors pop from your eyes

While you wait in the shadows for them to fall

Wait a while because 

The fun is about to begging

You wont leave me with my arms cross 

'Cause I'm the underdog

I will come back stronger then Saturn itself

And prove my strenght

To the ones who never believe in me

There's no way I'm going to get

Lost in the moment

It's time to begging

Get out of the shadows and see it for myself

Time moves forward..

I run fast in my car..

can't get away from your problems..

Seems like it's time to wake up

See it in the news

I will be all over the world

While you waste your time trying to bring me down

I'm already planning how to come back stronger

While you make the devil bark

I will shut him up

The sun will shine in my face

While yours will be in disgrace

Laugh at me all you want

'Cause it will only for a moment

I will kick you out of your throne

I never give up

Keep that in your mind

Reviews

[B.J]

I so like the positive tones, brilliant work

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much! I really appreciate it

[B.J]

your most welcome

[A Scribbler Named Bek]

Boom. You told them. I like the forceful tone of this piece. It's a lot different from what I usually read on here.

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much! I really appreciete it :0
I actually made this thinking about how everyone tends to critizice others by whom they are

[Lydia Shutter]

A write of empowerment. Intense. Lydi**

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Lydia, I really appreciete it

[Cool Girl]

A very powerful piece with a nice message! Love the poem:)

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much! I really appreciete it :)

[Cool Girl]

You're welcome!

[Laura Lynn]

my favorite line is "I will come back stronger than Saturn itself"

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much, and Indeed I used ''saturn'' because in greek mithology saturn is kronos the titan of time, one of the strongest titans