What I Think We Feel

Maybe, We all feel the same at some point after all

When you feel so tired

That you can't sleep

When everything you think

Is failure to your mind

And the long night hits you

Making you fall down again

What's the poing of love

If it goes to waste?

Nothing nice...

From up above I hear their words

A melody so sweet and nice

I can see earth now

I thousand people cry 

For those I tell you to drive

Drive away from your problems

And move forward...

A door open and you didn't go

A miss oportunity maybe it is

But don't worry you'll come with grace

To another great door

The stars at night they shine my way

Through this lonely and dark way

Althought I feel numb

I feel happy

I believe in light

A burning fire in the heart

Don't waste the fuel on it

Make it the most of it

And run as far as you can go

Believe and Dream 

Those are the joys of life

But to believe and dream

You need to wise

And think of what is your biggest disire

You may think you know..

But The soul Has other Ideas..

Oh dear love 

Something thats as cold as simple word

But that simple words brings joy to humans

You hide yourself from us

Bringing us people who are wrong to us

Because when the moments come

You'll never get away from the real love

So delicate as glass

And stronger then a planet

Love is the light of the colorless ones

And this is just another day in the office

Another day to watch the people of earth

From up above

Reviews

[B.J]

great work full of confidence and writing flow. The imagination flowed.

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much! I really appreciate it :)

[B.J]

your most welcome

[Daisygirl]

I found the poem to be somewhat inspirational, don't know if that was the intent but that's what I got out of it. It's really cool.

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much! I really appreciete it :)

[Stephen]

Thanks for sharing. I enjoyed the poem. It was very positive and uplifting. I need to do more writing of that nature myself.

[Lizardo]

Thank you, for your kind words :)

[DoormanDan]

One of the big reasons I enjoy your writing so much is the fact that you always write positive, uplifting writing. Your material, I am sure, helps out many people who are having a hard time. I did notice one typo though at the beginning, you wrote poing instead of point( Sorry if I sound like a word Nazi right now lol)

[Lizardo]

Hahaha don't worry :) thank you so much, I hope that your words a true Dan

[DoormanDan]

They are :)

[Moonlight]

Interesting and thought provoking.
The poem is definitely very meaningful and you have handled the theme exceptionally beautifully! I loved the concept and your efforts totally paid off on this one! Thanks for sharing! :)

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much, I really appreciete it :)

[Daisy]

wow.... it's amazing... the concept is too good.... it look like a soul is addressing people to have faith and don't be disappointed... just like we were swayed by demise and became a soul don't walk the same path......... it is beautiful... wonderful

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much! I really appreciete it

[Cool Girl]

I really really like this. It is very very meaningful :)

[Lizardo]

Thanks CG, I really appreciete it :)

[Cool Girl]

Ur welcome! :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

a twist on Martin Luther's speech...but having to do with more than romantic love...if you have a dream you need to go for it..otherwise you will look down from above after you are gone from this earth and say "why didn't i?"

i really like this line "Love is the light of the colorless ones"--

[Lizardo]

True, Thank you so much Jacob, I really appreciete it