But, you do

But, you do

A Poem by Marissa

You may not know it,
But, you've helped me believe.

You may not know it, 
But, you've showed me love.

You may not know it, 
But, you're the reason I still try.

You may not know it, 
But, you've taught me so much.

You may not know it, 
But, you make feel like I'm enough.

You may not know it, 
But, I need you.

You may not know it, 
But, I'm thankful for you.

You may not know it, 
But, I love you like a mom.

Now, I hope you know,
Everything you may not have known before.

© 2012 Marissa


Author's Note

Marissa
sucky, but it's for this other woman I know who is like a second mom to me...Should I show it to her??

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Yes you should. I was raised by a stepmother. I bought her a card and wrote a poem 45 years ago. She held the card close till her death. Kind words and appreciation is always needed. Thank you for the beautiful poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


Marissa

11 Years Ago

I definitely am going to show her...thank you for your kind words glad you liked it and that is a sw.. read more
I would show it to her if your relationship with her is strong...It can only make it stronger, don't you think?

very well written it is too

Posted 11 Years Ago


Marissa

11 Years Ago

You're right it will make our relationship stronger, just didn't know what y'all thought...Thank you.. read more
sure you should show it and read it for her, it is too sweet to be hiden..very nice sweet feeling penned in a very nicely way..

Posted 11 Years Ago


Marissa

11 Years Ago

thank you! I definitely will.
Definitely show her; it's so very heartwarming. A couple of things: third stanza, last line. Your should be you're. Also, put a space after your commas. Other than that, superb!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Marissa

11 Years Ago

Then I'll definitely show her thank you. And thanks for the advice appreciate it I'll fix it. (:
Falling Leaf.

11 Years Ago

No problem :)
Marissa

11 Years Ago

(:

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Added on December 10, 2012
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Hi! Im Marissa I like writing poems and im not very good but it's how I get my feelings out. I'm a sophomore. Nothing better than friends and family. (but to me family isn't always blood) and well I l.. more..

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