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La La Land
A Poem by
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<br /><br /> <div class='clear'></div> <a name='writing'></a> <div class='writing-item-writing-text' id='writingNotes'> Open the page<br>Digest the words<br>Fall into a new universe<br>A more beautiful world<br><br>Close my eyes <br>Against the down pour of tears<br>At least no one can hurt me here<br><br>Write out my pain<br>Dream my escape<br>That's better than dreary reality<br>Any day<br><br><span style="display:block;padding:6px 2px" class="msg">Perhaps I dwell in my lonely little la la land <br>Because its safer than the real world<br>Maybe I'm just scared to open up<br>And so afraid to get hurt<br><br>Please...can't you try to understand me?<br><br></span><br /> </div> <div id='writing_test'></div> <h4>© 2012 Lost in <iframe width="420" height="315"Wonderland</h4><br /><br /> <span st_url='http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/mickeyrox/1006819/' st_title='La La Land' st_summary='Open the pageDigest the wordsFall into a new universeA more beautiful worldClose my eyes Against the down pour of tearsAt least no one can hurt me her..' st_image='http://www.writerscafe.org/uploads/stories/thumbs/b497ae68ca9dcd740494a90d59c43708.jpg' class='st_facebook'></span> <span st_url='http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/mickeyrox/1006819/' st_title='La La Land' st_summary='Open the pageDigest the wordsFall into a new universeA more beautiful worldClose my eyes Against the down pour of tearsAt least no one can hurt me her..' st_image='http://www.writerscafe.org/uploads/stories/thumbs/b497ae68ca9dcd740494a90d59c43708.jpg' class='st_twitter'></span> <span st_url='http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/mickeyrox/1006819/' st_title='La La Land' st_summary='Open the pageDigest the wordsFall into a new universeA more beautiful worldClose my eyes Against the down pour of tearsAt least no one can hurt me her..' st_image='http://www.writerscafe.org/uploads/stories/thumbs/b497ae68ca9dcd740494a90d59c43708.jpg' class='st_stumbleupon'></span> <span st_url='http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/mickeyrox/1006819/' st_title='La La Land' st_summary='Open the pageDigest the wordsFall into a new universeA more beautiful worldClose my eyes Against the down pour of tearsAt least no one can hurt me her..' st_image='http://www.writerscafe.org/uploads/stories/thumbs/b497ae68ca9dcd740494a90d59c43708.jpg' class='st_email'></span> <span st_url='http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/mickeyrox/1006819/' st_title='La La Land' st_summary='Open the pageDigest the wordsFall into a new universeA more beautiful worldClose my eyes Against the down pour of tearsAt least no one can hurt me her..' st_image='http://www.writerscafe.org/uploads/stories/thumbs/b497ae68ca9dcd740494a90d59c43708.jpg' displayText='Share This' class='st_sharethis'></span> <div class='ad-left' style='margin:15px 0px;'> <div class='ad ad-size-728 ad-position-2'><center> <script type="text/javascript"> <!-- google_ad_client = "pub-9849799665214691"; /* 728x90 */ google_ad_slot = "3681180655"; google_ad_width = 728; google_ad_height = 90; //--> </script> <script type="text/javascript" src="http://pagead2.googlesyndication.com/pagead/show_ads.js"></script></center></div> </div> <h2>Author's Note</h2> <table width='100%' cellpadding='4'> <tr> <td width='110' valign='top'><img src='http://www.writerscafe.org/uploads/avatars/39df06623c642fbef8ce829ff0f31aa3.jpg' alt='Lost in <iframe width="420" height="315"Wonderland' width='100' height='75' class='box' /></td> <td valign='top'> <div class='box pad'>Just something I had to get out. God has the glory for letting me write, I don't know where I'd be without His gift. Feel free to review!</div> </td> </tr> </table><br /> <div class='writing-item-reviews'> <div class='writing-item-reviews-me'> <a name='comments'></a> <h2>My Review</h2> <table width='100%' cellpadding='4'> <tr> <td width='110' valign='top'><img src='http://www.writerscafe.org/images/no_image_s.jpg' alt='' width='100' height='75' class='box' /></td> <td valign='top'> <div class='box' style='text-align:center;'> Would you like to review this Poem?<br /> <a href='http://www.writerscafe.org/login/'>Login</a> | <a href='http://www.writerscafe.org/register/'>Register</a><br /><br /> </div> </td> </tr> </table> </div><br /> <div id='reviews'></div><br /><br /> <h2>Reviews</h2> <div class='row' id='review_2542414'> <a name='comment-2542414'></a> <table width='100%' cellpadding='8'> <tr> <td width='110' valign='top'> <div class='li s button' id='user_111038'> <div class='buttons' style='height:54px;'><img src='http://www.writerscafe.org/images/mail.png' width='16' height='16' alt='[send message]' class='absmiddle fade' /><img src='http://www.writerscafe.org/images/friend.png' width='16' height='16' alt='[befriend]' class='fade' /> <span id='subscription_111038_9203683'> <span class='fade'><img src='http://www.writerscafe.org/images/subscription_add.png' width='16' height='16' alt='Subscribe' /></span> </span></div> <a href='http://www.writerscafe.org/lirique'><img src='http://www.writerscafe.org/images/no_image_s.jpg' alt='lirique' width='100' height='75' class='box s' /></a> <div style='font-size:11px;'><center><a href='http://www.writerscafe.org/lirique'>lirique</a></center></div> </div></td> <td valign='top'> <div class='box'> <div class='pad'> <div id='review_view_2542414'> i really love this!! I can relate to it on so many levels - it truly speaks to me. I go to my own la la land so often, and you have captured the emotions associated with such an escape so beautifully. <br /><br /> <h4>Posted 10 Months Ago</h4><br /> </div> <form id='review_edit_2542414' action="javascript:saveIt('review_edit_2542414','review_2542414');" class='require' style='display:none;'> <textarea name='comment_text' style='width:95%;margin-top:2px;height:100px;' class='required'>i really love this!! I can relate to it on so many levels - it truly speaks to me. I go to my own la la land so often, and you have captured the emotions associated with such an escape so beautifully. </textarea> <div style='margin-top:6px;text-align:right;'> <div style='float:left;width:230px;text-align:left;'> Rating <input type='text' name='rating' value='' style='width:30px' class='digits' min='0' max='100' />/100 </div> <input type='submit' value='Save Comment' /> <input type='button' value='Cancel' onclick="showHide('review_edit_2542414');showHide('review_view_2542414');" /> </div> <input type='hidden' name='id' value='2542414' /> <input type='hidden' name='story_id' value='1006819' /> <input type='hidden' name='story_version' value='1' /> <input type='hidden' name='commented_id' value='90925' /> </form> </div> </div> <div style='margin-top:8px;'> <div style='float:right;text-align:right;width:130px;margin-right:10px;'> <h4> </h4> </div> <div style='float:left;margin-left:10px;width:300px;'> <h4> </h4> </div> </div> <div class='clear'></div> <div class='box review_reply' id='review_2542414_reply'> <div class='review_reply_replies' id='review_2542414_reply_replies'> <div class='row' id='review_reply_31412'> <a name='comment-2542414-31412'></a> <table width='100%'> <tr> <td class='td-image td-image-t'> <div class='li t' id='user_90925'> <a href='http://www.writerscafe.org/mickeyrox'><img src='http://www.writerscafe.org/uploads/avatars/tiny/39df06623c642fbef8ce829ff0f31aa3.jpg' alt='Lost in <iframe width="420" height="315"Wonderland' width='50' height='38' class='box t' /></a> </div></td> <td class='td-details'> <h4>10 Months Ago</h4> <div class='pad'> <span id='review_reply_31412_text_short'>Thank you so much:) God bless!</span> </div> </td> </tr> </table> </div> </div> </div> </td> </tr> </table> </div> <div class='row' id='review_2540026'> <a name='comment-2540026'></a> <table width='100%' cellpadding='8'> <tr> <td width='110' valign='top'> <div class='li s button' id='user_104261'> <div class='buttons' style='height:54px;'><img src='http://www.writerscafe.org/images/mail.png' width='16' height='16' alt='[send message]' class='absmiddle fade' /><img src='http://www.writerscafe.org/images/friend.png' width='16' height='16' alt='[befriend]' class='fade' /> <span id='subscription_104261_3401876'> <span class='fade'><img src='http://www.writerscafe.org/images/subscription_add.png' width='16' height='16' alt='Subscribe' /></span> </span></div> <a href='http://www.writerscafe.org/GregDiller'><img src='http://www.writerscafe.org/uploads/avatars/b7fc28d4bef340f79418463c31dd828b.JPG' alt='Greg Diller' width='100' height='75' class='box s' /></a> <div style='font-size:11px;'><center><a href='http://www.writerscafe.org/GregDiller'>Greg Diller</a></center></div> </div></td> <td valign='top'> <div class='box'> <div class='pad'> <div id='review_view_2540026'> I like this, it really seems it came straight up from the heart. I really like the lines. Awesome write <br /><br /> <h4>Posted 10 Months Ago</h4><br /> </div> <form id='review_edit_2540026' action="javascript:saveIt('review_edit_2540026','review_2540026');" class='require' style='display:none;'> <textarea name='comment_text' style='width:95%;margin-top:2px;height:100px;' class='required'>I like this, it really seems it came straight up from the heart. I really like the lines. Awesome write </textarea> <div style='margin-top:6px;text-align:right;'> <div style='float:left;width:230px;text-align:left;'> Rating <input type='text' name='rating' value='' style='width:30px' class='digits' min='0' max='100' />/100 </div> <input type='submit' value='Save Comment' /> <input type='button' value='Cancel' onclick="showHide('review_edit_2540026');showHide('review_view_2540026');" /> </div> <input type='hidden' name='id' value='2540026' /> <input type='hidden' name='story_id' value='1006819' /> <input type='hidden' name='story_version' value='1' /> <input type='hidden' name='commented_id' value='90925' /> </form> </div> </div> <div style='margin-top:8px;'> <div style='float:right;text-align:right;width:130px;margin-right:10px;'> <h4> </h4> </div> <div style='float:left;margin-left:10px;width:300px;'> <h4> </h4> </div> </div> <div class='clear'></div> <div class='box review_reply' id='review_2540026_reply'> <div class='review_reply_replies' id='review_2540026_reply_replies'> <div class='row' id='review_reply_29361'> <a name='comment-2540026-29361'></a> <table width='100%'> <tr> <td class='td-image td-image-t'> <div class='li t' id='user_90925'> <a href='http://www.writerscafe.org/mickeyrox'><img src='http://www.writerscafe.org/uploads/avatars/tiny/39df06623c642fbef8ce829ff0f31aa3.jpg' alt='Lost in <iframe width="420" height="315"Wonderland' width='50' height='38' class='box t' /></a> </div></td> <td class='td-details'> <h4>10 Months Ago</h4> <div class='pad'> <span id='review_reply_29361_text_short'>Thank you very much:) God bless</span> </div> </td> </tr> </table> </div> </div> </div> </td> </tr> </table> </div> <div class='row' id='review_2539949'> <a name='comment-2539949'></a> <table width='100%' cellpadding='8'> <tr> <td width='110' valign='top'> <div class='li s button' id='user_75884'> <div class='buttons' style='height:54px;'><img src='http://www.writerscafe.org/images/mail.png' width='16' height='16' alt='[send 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style='display:none;'> <textarea name='comment_text' style='width:95%;margin-top:2px;height:100px;' class='required'>'Open the page Digest the words' I love reading:) Beautiful!</textarea> <div style='margin-top:6px;text-align:right;'> <div style='float:left;width:230px;text-align:left;'> Rating <input type='text' name='rating' value='' style='width:30px' class='digits' min='0' max='100' />/100 </div> <input type='submit' value='Save Comment' /> <input type='button' value='Cancel' onclick="showHide('review_edit_2539949');showHide('review_view_2539949');" /> </div> <input type='hidden' name='id' value='2539949' /> <input type='hidden' name='story_id' value='1006819' /> <input type='hidden' name='story_version' value='1' /> <input type='hidden' name='commented_id' value='90925' /> </form> </div> </div> <div style='margin-top:8px;'> <div style='float:right;text-align:right;width:130px;margin-right:10px;'> <h4> </h4> </div> <div style='float:left;margin-left:10px;width:300px;'> <h4> </h4> </div> </div> <div class='clear'></div> <div class='box review_reply' id='review_2539949_reply'> <div class='review_reply_replies' id='review_2539949_reply_replies'> <div class='row' id='review_reply_29259'> <a name='comment-2539949-29259'></a> <table width='100%'> <tr> <td class='td-image td-image-t'> <div class='li t' id='user_90925'> <a href='http://www.writerscafe.org/mickeyrox'><img src='http://www.writerscafe.org/uploads/avatars/tiny/39df06623c642fbef8ce829ff0f31aa3.jpg' alt='Lost in <iframe width="420" height="315"Wonderland' width='50' height='38' class='box t' /></a> </div></td> <td class='td-details'> <h4>10 Months Ago</h4> <div class='pad'> <span id='review_reply_29259_text_short'>Thank you, and I love reading too:) God bless</span> </div> </td> </tr> </table> </div> <div class='row' id='review_reply_29263'> <a name='comment-2539949-29263'></a> <table width='100%'> <tr> <td class='td-image td-image-t'> <div class='li t' id='user_75884'> <a href='http://www.writerscafe.org/H.%20Harder'><img src='http://www.writerscafe.org/uploads/avatars/tiny/f028ba9da209c1b20169a1ecbb22c95f.jpg' alt='Yina' width='50' height='38' class='box t' /></a> </div></td> <td class='td-details'> <h4>10 Months Ago</h4> <div class='pad'> <span id='review_reply_29263_text_short'>Any time:)</span> </div> </td> </tr> </table> </div> </div> </div> </td> </tr> </table> </div> <div class='row' id='review_2534353'> <a name='comment-2534353'></a> <table width='100%' cellpadding='8'> <tr> <td width='110' valign='top'> <div class='li s button' id='user_109681'> <div class='buttons' style='height:54px;'><img src='http://www.writerscafe.org/images/mail.png' width='16' height='16' alt='[send message]' class='absmiddle fade' /><img src='http://www.writerscafe.org/images/friend.png' width='16' height='16' alt='[befriend]' class='fade' /> <span id='subscription_109681_6784070'> <span class='fade'><img src='http://www.writerscafe.org/images/subscription_add.png' width='16' height='16' alt='Subscribe' /></span> </span></div> <a href='http://www.writerscafe.org/CALucas'><img src='http://www.writerscafe.org/uploads/avatars/a02d0e19cd55076469336967758f62f4.jpg' alt='C.A. Lucas' width='100' height='75' class='box s' /></a> <div style='font-size:11px;'><center><a href='http://www.writerscafe.org/CALucas'>C.A. Lucas</a></center></div> </div></td> <td valign='top'> <div class='box'> <div class='pad'> <div id='review_view_2534353'> Something about this piece- not the description- gives me great imagery and makes me so interested. I don't know what it is. I guess I'm the only one who can imagine a LaLa Land so vividly.<br /><br /> <h4>Posted 11 Months Ago</h4><br /> </div> <form id='review_edit_2534353' action="javascript:saveIt('review_edit_2534353','review_2534353');" class='require' style='display:none;'> <textarea name='comment_text' style='width:95%;margin-top:2px;height:100px;' class='required'>Something about this piece- not the description- gives me great imagery and makes me so interested. I don't know what it is. I guess I'm the only one who can imagine a LaLa Land so vividly.</textarea> <div style='margin-top:6px;text-align:right;'> <div style='float:left;width:230px;text-align:left;'> Rating <input type='text' name='rating' value='' style='width:30px' class='digits' min='0' max='100' />/100 </div> <input type='submit' value='Save Comment' /> <input type='button' value='Cancel' onclick="showHide('review_edit_2534353');showHide('review_view_2534353');" /> </div> <input type='hidden' name='id' value='2534353' /> <input type='hidden' name='story_id' value='1006819' /> <input type='hidden' name='story_version' value='1' /> <input type='hidden' name='commented_id' value='90925' /> </form> </div> </div> <div style='margin-top:8px;'> <div style='float:right;text-align:right;width:130px;margin-right:10px;'> <h4> </h4> </div> <div style='float:left;margin-left:10px;width:300px;'> <h4> </h4> </div> </div> <div class='clear'></div> <div class='box review_reply' id='review_2534353_reply'> <div class='review_reply_replies' id='review_2534353_reply_replies'> <div class='row' id='review_reply_24384'> <a name='comment-2534353-24384'></a> <table width='100%'> <tr> <td class='td-image td-image-t'> <div class='li t' id='user_90925'> <a href='http://www.writerscafe.org/mickeyrox'><img src='http://www.writerscafe.org/uploads/avatars/tiny/39df06623c642fbef8ce829ff0f31aa3.jpg' alt='Lost in <iframe width="420" height="315"Wonderland' width='50' height='38' class='box t' /></a> </div></td> <td class='td-details'> <h4>11 Months Ago</h4> <div class='pad'> <span id='review_reply_24384_text_short'>Thank you:) and I'm glad you can see it to:) I see it in writings so I'm glad u could see it in this</span> </div> </td> </tr> </table> </div> </div> </div> </td> </tr> </table> </div> <div class='row' id='review_2530904'> <a name='comment-2530904'></a> <table width='100%' cellpadding='8'> <tr> <td width='110' valign='top'> <div class='li s button' id='user_108182'> <div class='buttons' style='height:54px;'><img src='http://www.writerscafe.org/images/mail.png' width='16' height='16' alt='[send message]' class='absmiddle fade' /><img src='http://www.writerscafe.org/images/friend.png' width='16' height='16' alt='[befriend]' class='fade' /> <span id='subscription_108182_2183558'> <span class='fade'><img src='http://www.writerscafe.org/images/subscription_add.png' width='16' height='16' alt='Subscribe' /></span> </span></div> <a href='http://www.writerscafe.org/BlackHeartaFly'><img src='http://www.writerscafe.org/uploads/avatars/2ab168b2f5320243c49c4a75e6a08ec5.jpg' alt='Serenity Faith' width='100' height='75' class='box s' /></a> <div style='font-size:11px;'><center><a href='http://www.writerscafe.org/BlackHeartaFly'>Serenity Faith</a></center></div> </div></td> <td valign='top'> <div class='box'> <div class='pad'> <div id='review_view_2530904'> Wonderful Mickey! I think everyone at some point or another has their own la la land. Though there are times I wish I could drag others into mine, they'd become so happeh ^_^ Though then I must agree that it's my own safe haven. And my sanctuary is meant for me and me alone. Great job as always!<br /><br /> <h4>Posted 11 Months Ago</h4><br /> </div> <form id='review_edit_2530904' action="javascript:saveIt('review_edit_2530904','review_2530904');" class='require' style='display:none;'> <textarea name='comment_text' style='width:95%;margin-top:2px;height:100px;' class='required'>Wonderful Mickey! I think everyone at some point or another has their own la la land. Though there are times I wish I could drag others into mine, they'd become so happeh ^_^ Though then I must agree that it's my own safe haven. And my sanctuary is meant for me and me alone. Great job as always!</textarea> <div style='margin-top:6px;text-align:right;'> <div style='float:left;width:230px;text-align:left;'> Rating <input type='text' name='rating' value='' style='width:30px' class='digits' min='0' max='100' />/100 </div> <input type='submit' value='Save Comment' /> <input type='button' value='Cancel' onclick="showHide('review_edit_2530904');showHide('review_view_2530904');" /> </div> <input type='hidden' name='id' value='2530904' /> <input type='hidden' name='story_id' value='1006819' /> <input type='hidden' name='story_version' value='1' /> <input type='hidden' name='commented_id' value='90925' /> </form> </div> </div> <div style='margin-top:8px;'> <div style='float:right;text-align:right;width:130px;margin-right:10px;'> <h4> </h4> </div> <div style='float:left;margin-left:10px;width:300px;'> <h4> </h4> </div> </div> <div class='clear'></div> <div class='box review_reply' id='review_2530904_reply'> <div class='review_reply_replies' id='review_2530904_reply_replies'> <div class='row' id='review_reply_21598'> <a name='comment-2530904-21598'></a> <table width='100%'> <tr> <td class='td-image td-image-t'> <div class='li t' id='user_90925'> <a href='http://www.writerscafe.org/mickeyrox'><img src='http://www.writerscafe.org/uploads/avatars/tiny/39df06623c642fbef8ce829ff0f31aa3.jpg' alt='Lost in <iframe width="420" height="315"Wonderland' width='50' height='38' class='box t' /></a> </div></td> <td class='td-details'> <h4>11 Months Ago</h4> <div class='pad'> <span id='review_reply_21598_text_short'>Aw thanks Emily :3 </span> </div> </td> </tr> </table> </div> </div> </div> </td> </tr> </table> </div> <div class='row'> <div class='ad ad-size-728 ad-position-2'><center> <div id='lijit_region_182046'></div> <script type='text/javascript' src='http://www.lijit.com/delivery/fp?u=writerscafe&i=lijit_region_182046&z=182046&n=1'></script></center></div> </div> <div class='row' id='review_2526683'> <a name='comment-2526683'></a> <table width='100%' cellpadding='8'> <tr> <td width='110' valign='top'> <div class='li s button' id='user_109193'> <div class='buttons' style='height:54px;'><img src='http://www.writerscafe.org/images/mail.png' width='16' height='16' alt='[send message]' class='absmiddle fade' /><img src='http://www.writerscafe.org/images/friend.png' width='16' height='16' alt='[befriend]' class='fade' /> <span id='subscription_109193_8164228'> <span class='fade'><img src='http://www.writerscafe.org/images/subscription_add.png' width='16' height='16' alt='Subscribe' /></span> </span></div> <a href='http://www.writerscafe.org/AceTesfaye'><img src='http://www.writerscafe.org/uploads/avatars/6742dc923972b8949b66b0c5b9c8b426.jpeg' alt='Ace ' width='100' height='75' class='box s' /></a> <div style='font-size:11px;'><center><a href='http://www.writerscafe.org/AceTesfaye'>Ace </a></center></div> </div></td> <td valign='top'> <div class='box'> <div class='pad'> <div id='review_view_2526683'> I love this ! I really relate to it and it's beautifully written !<br /><br /> <h4>Posted 11 Months Ago</h4><br /> </div> <form id='review_edit_2526683' action="javascript:saveIt('review_edit_2526683','review_2526683');" class='require' style='display:none;'> <textarea name='comment_text' style='width:95%;margin-top:2px;height:100px;' class='required'>I love this ! I really relate to it and it's beautifully written !</textarea> <div style='margin-top:6px;text-align:right;'> <div style='float:left;width:230px;text-align:left;'> Rating <input type='text' name='rating' value='' style='width:30px' class='digits' min='0' max='100' />/100 </div> <input type='submit' value='Save Comment' /> <input type='button' value='Cancel' onclick="showHide('review_edit_2526683');showHide('review_view_2526683');" /> </div> <input type='hidden' name='id' value='2526683' /> <input type='hidden' name='story_id' value='1006819' /> <input type='hidden' name='story_version' value='1' /> <input type='hidden' name='commented_id' value='90925' /> </form> </div> </div> <div style='margin-top:8px;'> <div style='float:right;text-align:right;width:130px;margin-right:10px;'> <h4> </h4> </div> <div style='float:left;margin-left:10px;width:300px;'> <h4> </h4> </div> </div> <div class='clear'></div> <div class='box review_reply' id='review_2526683_reply'> <div class='review_reply_replies' id='review_2526683_reply_replies'> <div class='row' id='review_reply_18617'> <a name='comment-2526683-18617'></a> <table width='100%'> <tr> <td class='td-image td-image-t'> <div class='li t' id='user_90925'> <a href='http://www.writerscafe.org/mickeyrox'><img src='http://www.writerscafe.org/uploads/avatars/tiny/39df06623c642fbef8ce829ff0f31aa3.jpg' alt='Lost in <iframe width="420" height="315"Wonderland' width='50' height='38' class='box t' /></a> </div></td> <td class='td-details'> <h4>11 Months Ago</h4> <div class='pad'> <span id='review_reply_18617_text_short'>Thank you:)</span> </div> </td> </tr> </table> </div> </div> </div> </td> </tr> </table> </div> <div class='row' id='review_2525963'> <a name='comment-2525963'></a> <table width='100%' cellpadding='8'> <tr> <td width='110' valign='top'> <div class='li s button' id='user_85153'> <div class='buttons' style='height:54px;'><img src='http://www.writerscafe.org/images/mail.png' width='16' height='16' alt='[send message]' class='absmiddle fade' /><img src='http://www.writerscafe.org/images/friend.png' width='16' height='16' alt='[befriend]' class='fade' /> <span id='subscription_85153_7437593'> <span class='fade'><img src='http://www.writerscafe.org/images/subscription_add.png' width='16' height='16' alt='Subscribe' /></span> </span></div> <a href='http://www.writerscafe.org/Malevolence'><img src='http://www.writerscafe.org/uploads/avatars/7fe6297a638db9a9a5b8ed2f7c07926d.jpg' alt='Tai' width='100' height='75' class='box s' /></a> <div style='font-size:11px;'><center><a href='http://www.writerscafe.org/Malevolence'>Tai</a></center></div> </div></td> <td valign='top'> <div class='box'> <div class='pad'> <div id='review_view_2525963'> The flow is disturbed every now and then, but the concept is lovely and the quality is fine indeed! Great job!<br /><br /> <h4>Posted 11 Months Ago</h4><br /> </div> <form id='review_edit_2525963' action="javascript:saveIt('review_edit_2525963','review_2525963');" class='require' style='display:none;'> <textarea name='comment_text' style='width:95%;margin-top:2px;height:100px;' class='required'>The flow is disturbed every now and then, but the concept is lovely and the quality is fine indeed! Great job!</textarea> <div style='margin-top:6px;text-align:right;'> <div style='float:left;width:230px;text-align:left;'> Rating <input type='text' name='rating' value='' style='width:30px' class='digits' min='0' max='100' />/100 </div> <input type='submit' value='Save Comment' /> <input type='button' value='Cancel' onclick="showHide('review_edit_2525963');showHide('review_view_2525963');" /> </div> <input type='hidden' name='id' value='2525963' /> <input type='hidden' name='story_id' value='1006819' /> <input type='hidden' name='story_version' value='1' /> <input type='hidden' name='commented_id' value='90925' /> </form> </div> </div> <div style='margin-top:8px;'> <div style='float:right;text-align:right;width:130px;margin-right:10px;'> <h4> </h4> </div> <div style='float:left;margin-left:10px;width:300px;'> <h4> </h4> </div> </div> <div class='clear'></div> <div class='box review_reply' id='review_2525963_reply'> <div class='review_reply_replies' id='review_2525963_reply_replies'> </div> <div class='pad row' id='review_2525963_reply_replies_hidden_link'> <a href='javascript:void(0);' onclick="$('#review_2525963_reply_replies_hidden').show();$('#review_2525963_reply_replies_hidden_link').hide();" class='more'>View 0 more replies</a> </div> <div class='row' id='review_reply_18281'> <a name='comment-2525963-18281'></a> <table width='100%'> <tr> <td class='td-image td-image-t'> <div class='li t' id='user_90925'> <a href='http://www.writerscafe.org/mickeyrox'><img src='http://www.writerscafe.org/uploads/avatars/tiny/39df06623c642fbef8ce829ff0f31aa3.jpg' alt='Lost in <iframe width="420" height="315"Wonderland' width='50' height='38' class='box t' /></a> </div></td> <td class='td-details'> <h4>11 Months Ago</h4> <div class='pad'> <span id='review_reply_18281_text_short'>Thank you, and do you have any suggestions for how the flow can be better?</span> </div> </td> </tr> </table> </div> <div class='row' id='review_reply_19082'> <a name='comment-2525963-19082'></a> <table width='100%'> <tr> <td class='td-image td-image-t'> <div class='li t' id='user_85153'> <a href='http://www.writerscafe.org/Malevolence'><img src='http://www.writerscafe.org/uploads/avatars/tiny/7fe6297a638db9a9a5b8ed2f7c07926d.jpg' alt='Tai' width='50' height='38' class='box t' /></a> </div></td> <td class='td-details'> <h4>11 Months Ago</h4> <div class='pad'> <span id='review_reply_19082_text_short'>I'd say shorten a few lines; and/or lengthen other. As for which lines, I leave you the task of det.. <a href='javascript:void(0);' onclick="$('#review_reply_19082_text_full').show();$('#review_reply_19082_text_short').hide();" class='more review_reply-more'>read more</a></span><span id='review_reply_19082_text_full' style='display:none;'>I'd say shorten a few lines; and/or lengthen other. As for which lines, I leave you the task of determining them.</span> </div> </td> </tr> </table> </div> <div class='row' id='review_reply_19092'> <a name='comment-2525963-19092'></a> <table width='100%'> <tr> <td class='td-image td-image-t'> <div class='li t' id='user_90925'> <a href='http://www.writerscafe.org/mickeyrox'><img src='http://www.writerscafe.org/uploads/avatars/tiny/39df06623c642fbef8ce829ff0f31aa3.jpg' alt='Lost in <iframe width="420" height="315"Wonderland' width='50' height='38' class='box t' /></a> </div></td> <td class='td-details'> <h4>11 Months Ago</h4> <div class='pad'> <span id='review_reply_19092_text_short'>ok thanks, I'll look at that!</span> </div> </td> </tr> </table> </div> </div> </div> </td> </tr> </table> </div><br /> </div> </div> </td> <td class='writing-item-center'></td> <td class='writing-item-right' valign='top'> <div class='box'> <div class='actions actions-narrow'> <div class='action'> <span 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