I love you

The light shone lightly behind as

our footsteps gently penetrated the sand

Our hands intertwined

The moon was rising in its magnifecence

the stars twinkled as brightly as his eyes

our heads turned looking into each others eyes as if it would never end

we stared in all our passion and our love in our inperfectness

but not inperfectness every being in his body was as perfect as the sun

as our gaze grew closer our lips touched gently

the skin of his soft hand stroked my cheek

he whispered as beautiful as the blowing wind

I love you

Reviews

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

I love this poem...the description and everything...a very very beautiful poem indeed :)

[17thWhitePrince]

wow ... very very nice ... I liked it a lot ... how you described the whole scene was just amazing really ... very very well thought out ... awesome ... the poem is very well written indeed I must say ... and how it just ends with those three words is just wonderful ... you did a really good job with this poem I have to say ... it described everything perfectly ... wow ... you should be proud ... :)

[Wicahpi]

Beautiful Minty!!
Young love ...... ahhhh