Moment Frozen

Moment Frozen

A Poem by Mitali Shah
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Coming back after departure. Love always finds it way back if its meant for you.

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Eyes swollen

Grudges broken

Love woken

Words Unspoken...

© 2015 Mitali Shah



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It's small but reading it gives a nice feeling. The words are deep. I really liked it.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Grudges broken
Words Unspoken...
Gd lines, nd commendable creativity...

Posted 2 Years Ago


Mitali Shah

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much Arjun :)
sounds like a good fight going on

Posted 2 Years Ago


Mitali Shah

2 Years Ago

hehe sort of dear ;)
........love this, so much said in so few words...to keep love alive in friendship, I feel communication is the key ★

Posted 2 Years Ago


Mitali Shah

2 Years Ago

Thanks for the appreciation sunprincess :)
sunprincess

2 Years Ago

...........most welcome :) ★
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Sky
Words Unspoken & the Moment Frozen.......Beautiful lines!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Mitali Shah

2 Years Ago

Thanks Skyfall :)
Sky

2 Years Ago

welcome friend!
Very good use of words. Create place and situation. Create vision of sadness and silence. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


Mitali Shah

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much Coyote :)
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

You are welcome.
you paint a picture of pain ,a great write

Posted 2 Years Ago


Mitali Shah

2 Years Ago

Thanks Wordman
 wordman

2 Years Ago

you are welcome
You are really putting pen to paper lately Mitali. I know heartache will do that makes poems or songs some of the best when they come from the heart.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Mitali Shah

2 Years Ago

Thank you Robert for your kind appreciation :)
A piece that in a few short lines paints a picture of grief and loss at the end of a relationship by its pace and structure and word choice.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Mitali Shah

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much John for your appreciation :)
Love does indeed find its way back via the trail of breadcrumbs our hearts leave. If the vultures of bitterness havent gobbled them all up. Words unspoken makes me think that stuff is being swept under the carpet though - talking is always better - theres nothing like making up first though.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Mitali Shah

2 Years Ago

Thank you ANTO. Appreciate your review :) God bless
ANTO

2 Years Ago

Your welcome Mitali - take care
:))

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Added on June 24, 2015
Last Updated on June 24, 2015
Tags: Love, Grudges, Pain, Happiness

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Mitali Shah
Mitali Shah

Mumbai, Maharashtra, India



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