The pumpkin ate me and I died... Oops!

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The pumpkin ate me and I died... Oops!

 

It was a bright crisp fall day

right beside me come what may

there sat a big bright orange pumpkin

 

The pumpkin ate me and I died... Oops!

 

So with my 8th life that I had left

well I felt that it was best

that I make my way over

to the pet doctor just west 

 

I told the pet doctor just this...

The pumpkin ate me and I died... Oops!

 

He said you better watch out

before you scream and shout

just next he told me this...

there are alot of pumpkin killings going on all about

 

Before I could scream and shout

you'll never guess what happened next...

 

The pumpkin ate me and I died... Oops!

 

So with my 7th life that I had left

well I felt it was best

that I make my way over

to the pet doctor just west

 

I told the pet doctor just this...

The pumpkin ate me and I died... Oops!

 

He said you better be on the look out

with these pumpkins running all about

just next he told me this...

Farmer Jones wife told the doctor that

the pumpkin ate him and he died... Oops!

 

Well so I took myself and my lucky 7 lives

 and just ran away for miles and miles....

before the pumpkin ate me and I died... Oops!

Reviews

[Joseph - Michael]

Can I assume that you're a cat? I mean, you wrote down "the pumpkin ate me and I died..." seven times and you have 2 lives left, right? It's a real enjoyable version of "Attack Of The Killer Tomato" along with spice of Halloween

So, it's a real cute piece you've created there. I bet your grandkids would love to hear you sing it to them?

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Congratulations for winning the Halloween Contest!

[Puella M. W.]

Hey, nice poem! Cute and humorous, I love it.

[Puzzle-bot]

the pumpkin ate me and I died, Oops!
what a funny poem! it had me laugh ing my head off! (literily, -the pumpkin-!)

[Tony Hwilka]

Very funny, But oooo the pumkin ate me and I died... Oops. Cute write and good luck in the contest. Tony

[A LaDy NaMeD D]

lol i love cats! This was funny and it put a whole new spin on Halloween, *which doesn't always have to be scary.* I loved this!

Danni

[Sean M. Addams]

very clever piece ..... nice flow and like the humor in this... great job

[angelina neves]

:) lovely!

[Lucy Kennedy]

Read over the contest and have been reading over the submissions and I like yours the best! The story feel about it the ryhme scheme you used and the fact that you don't say the main character is a cat but drop the hints. I loooved this poem. Great work. Let me know if I have permission to use it this Halloween.