Women

Women

A Poem by Mustafa
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Women are the great equalizers of life

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Women are the great equalizers of life
Women can provide great care and comfort
They will live and die for the person they care for
Yet why do men cheat on women for?
Is the allure of sex with different women better?
Women in retrospect show more strength
They love more and appreciate more
Women are life's great testers
They will see if you are worthy
Worthy of their love
Worthy of their time
Worthy of their sex
Finally worthy for life.
Is it time we as men show
We are worthy of all that those aspects
Without women we are nothing
We would fall and we would crumble




© 2010 Mustafa



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I like this. Very well stated.


Posted 8 Years Ago


not all women prove themselves worthy,
nor do all men...

great insightful write

Posted 8 Years Ago


OMG Mustafa, this was fantastic!

"Women in retrospect show more strength
They love more and appreciate more
Women are life's great testers"


"Is it time we as men show
We are worthy of all that those aspects
Without women we are nothing
We would fall and we would crumble"

I have never heard these words from the lips of any man, ever!
The insight and also respect you have of women is a precious
gift. And to have this at such a young age I think is absolutely rare.

Men take note!!

Another of your beautiful writings Mustafa, keep that ink flowing! 100 percent for this one.

Helena








Posted 8 Years Ago


Haha. 100 points for creativity, 100 points for supporting women, 100 points just for the thought. XD Haha. Great, loved it. Women need to be appreciated too! Nice!

Posted 8 Years Ago


great great job

Posted 8 Years Ago


i really liked this. I like it even better now that I realized it was written by a man hahah

Posted 8 Years Ago


A great poem! To me the mistakes we make are some part due to what we have experience in our early child hood. If we see that our father beats our mother we tend to do the same thing when we grow up. It goes as well for having sex with many women. Woman should be caressed and loved. We tend to forget about the respect we owe them and just let our natural animal instincts take over.Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece.

Posted 8 Years Ago


A wise man knows to love and protect woman. But a woman had a advantage. When she desire to overtake a man. Few men have a chance. A excellent view on woman in your words. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Mustafa
Mustafa

Astoria, NY



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