Haiku Yesterday's Dream

Haiku Yesterday’s Dream

Waters touched her skin

That fell from a clear blue sky

Leaked into her heart

 

 

Tumult fills the air

Pageant odds, tomorrow’s queen

Crown floating on waters blue

 

 

 

Heart is broken on this day

She’s bound to dwell in shadows

Her tears falling with the rain

 

 

 

Queen of the pageant

Leaked into yesterday’s dream

Lost in the moment

 

 

 

Dwell on things gone wrong

Waters of insanity

Floating through her mind

Reviews

[Rhiannon Dragonraine]

I think this portrays the emotion that you felt; in some ways this feels raw and a little inelegant but it is fitting with the theme of this poem. We all have disappointments and dreams we must release; it is important to remember that when we let one dream grow it gives us room to grow and to grasp different dream.
Brightest Blessings and Warmest Wishes,
Rhiannon

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Congratulations for winning the Haiku-Dreams contest!

[Tovli]

a nice poem--great imagery.

[angelina neves]

very beautiful!

[just is]

Such feeling and strong emotion here, This is a wonderful write.