A 5 years olds vision for god

 when i look at the sky

I wonder how the birds fly

  when i look at the tree

I wonder how it is laden with fruits without greed

       Is this all gods meed?

when i see the moon

I wonder why it follows me and i think ,it will be with me till noon

 when i  see the lightning

I wonder their might be some short circuit happening

 when i see the rain

I wonder why god cries ,Is there is something that even thee cannot gain?

     God is without any greed

       Is this all gods meed?    

when i  look at the waters color

I wonder how god uses his brush to shine the flowers

 when i  look at the island

I wonder god wanted a place to rest but why not Egypt, Greek, or   Thailand

 when i  look at the nature

I wonder how god could create such a beautiful texture

 when i   think of god its thanksgiving

I wonder all I have is hopping

             God is without any greed

       Is this all gods meed ?   

I am a boy 5 years old

I am enough capable to turn iron into gold

But everything we have is already sold

But still we have hope

That we cannot be dope

To have faith on the benefiter

Because of which we can turn to fighter

             God is without any greed

       Is this all gods meed   ?

 

Reviews

[K Scott Smith]

I liked the thoughts you explored here a lot. Well done

[Naysan arif]

Thank you so much Mr scott.. it means a lot..:)

[Naysan arif]

This is a perception of a 5 year old child about nature , god..... i have tried to transform it into a poem.. I hope everyone likes it...., :)