Christmas Haiku

Christmas Haiku

A Poem by MandaBear
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This is my first Haiku I think I did it right. I hope you enjoy

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Christmas 
Snowflakes falling 
Lots of presents underneath the tree 
Merry Christmas to all 


© 2014 MandaBear


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Nice thoughts within...however you have too many syllables for a haiku..17 is what. Is needed in 5-7-5 format ..rework this and you'll have a haiku..

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on November 20, 2014
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Tags: Christmas, haiku, poem.poetry