Mirror, Mirror on the wall

Just something that came to mind:) Love or Hate?

Mirror, Mirror on the wall,

All I see is someone that's short and small.

Looking back at a cracked reflection,

Seeing all the imperfections.

What can you break?

Can you fix broken glass?

Mirror, Mirror on the wall,

Surely someone else is fairest of all.

How can this beast be beautiful?

With hair so frayed;

Skin so pale,

Heart so cold and black?

And for what; a mirror cracked?

Shattered broken glass?

Mirror, Mirror on the wall,

To what do you have to say?

You are beautiful no matter what I say,

I know its what inside that counts

But sometimes to see someones insides

You need to see less of their outsides.

Reviews

[Jay]

Thank you so much for this poem. It really encouraged me c:

[Backlight Burner]

I would recommend anybody with low self-esteem to read this. You did an amazing job of how alot of people see themselves. I love how it also reminds me of a great classic :) lol Great job, well done!!

[once upon a time]

I honestly do not know what to say! This is so so so good. I am so amazed! I really want to read more of your work. Thank you so much for sharing this! I really enjoyed reading it.

[Sophie]

Oh my god. This is truly amazing, you have stunned me, I"m not usually the speechless type, but I am now.
Wonderful.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

"But sometimes to see someones insides
You need to see less of their outsides."

Deep!

[Matthew Ryan Hardy]

Very nice

-Matthew Hardy-

[Mellie]

Hmm, this is a sweet, yet powerful write. Amazing job. I love this because when I look at myself with each of my problems. That I'm too fat, too ugly, my hairs a wreck. I love this because I can relate to it and I love the fact that you wrote about this. Nice job (:

[Simbake777]

Loving the rhythm here! A superb write, full of truth: Despite what the mirror says, we are all beautiful and unique!

Definitely an addition to the library!! ;)

Keep up the good work!! :)

[Ashley Rivers :)]

I love this. That is what I try to tell people that the true beauty is from within :) You did a fantastic job on this!

[Angelic Surrender]

WOW. This is awesome. The beauty inside is what really matters. Great work