Cut Deep

Just something I thought of. I am in no way condoning cutting or harming yourself in anyway. This was just something I made up. I hope you like it.

Cuts all down your arm,

Feeling no pain as blood drips.

Waiting everything to go away.

Nothing else really matters.

Cuts so deep,

Blood runs out; 

Like a water down the river.

Cuts go so deep.

Laying there waiting to see the light;

Yet, darkness is coming fast.

Trying to remember the last time you want to be alive.

Trying to think of anything to help you cope.

Only moments pass by;

Yet, It feels like eternity.

No one has come looking.

Does anyone really care?

Cuts and bruises line your arm.

Darkness and Sadness line your heart.

Nothing else matters.

Exit light, enter night.   

As the final drop of blood leaves,

You finally feel at peace with the world.

Your soul is cleansed from the darkness.

All your cuts and bruises are no more.

Reviews

[stephen dillon]

nice metallica cameo

[LegitFlyingTaco]

This is really beautiful. I like how it ends some-what in a positive note. Well done. (:

[Coyote Poetry]

Pain can lead you to the wrong place. Cutting is for many reasons. I met people in my lifetime who cut themselves for 20 years. They told me. Only things to make them feel a live. i don't understand it. But each of us walk a difficult path. A powerful story with a sad ending. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Sophie]

Beautiful. I really liked it, it's brilliant. Well done.

[Vivere ad mihi, mi Deus]

i loved the last stanza, well done, i like this.

[Thrinna Mae]

Aw...That's quite painful, haha! Anyway, very well expressed.
:)))

[Aka_Kitsune]

reminds me so much about my past cutting... beautiful

[Calypso]

Reminds me of so much...
Talking about cutting makes my stomach quake.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

"Cuts so deep,
Blood runs out;
Like a water down the river.
Cuts go so deep."

fav stanza!

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

As a former "cutter", this certainly is the emotions behind it. A release for all the pain we feel in our souls at the time. Nicely done.