Dream Dimension

Dream Dimension

A Poem by Daydreamer
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I believe in the things only I can see.

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I travelled through my senses
and yes, my dreams travelled
all within me
~
Thoughts as fires
Dreams as wars
Truths as pillars


Night cloaks and morning windows;
Swallowed walls and spilled cores

Sunsets swallowed by the seas
Strange music and offline notes

Dreams breaking into pearls
Ardent skin and woven beams

Cracks, tunnels, and fleeting wheels
Locked forevers and freedom streams

Visions as friends
Stars as walls
Daydreams,layers, and a million thoughts

Discovered poetry, and learned evermores

Dreaming as a religion
Fearlessness as a chisel

Delicate remedies and elegant dreams


The skies as eyes for what we do


The streets as home for what we dream


© 2015 Daydreamer



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It's surprising how it was just a couple of days ago I had been thinking about how I felt that we travel different dimensions through the different senses we possess. And how all of them superimpose one another to let us be able to fully experience this mortal reality. It's such a beautifully multi-dimensional world; while the world we visit in dreams (the literal ones) is such a contrast to it, where we have none of the senses feeding us with information, yet, dreams feel so real sometimes. Oh, I seem to have a lot to say, I hope I don't bore you. I really love this poem, ahhh. Guess what, I'm shaking my head, literally, because I just can't quote a favorite line, I can't, I'll just end up quoting your whole poem here. I absolutely admire your skillfulness, the way you create beauty through words and breathe meanings and wisdom into them. There's rhythm, lovely smooth flow and when I let your lines form images in my head, it's a great great experience. You're the queen of metaphors, haha. Then when I got to the end, I felt déjà vu and you'll see what I mean, Manal. I also have a suggestion (about some changes) to make, if you don't mind:
I have travelled through my senses
and yes, my dreams travel
all within me
*
And do keep writing my friend! :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daydreamer

1 Year Ago

You're one of the best and most flattering people who ever talked about my poetry.. your reviews are.. read more



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Dreaming as a religion....a bit Utopian, but a lovely thought. If we can chisel through our thoughts, we can be happier. Good write. Lydi**

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Daydreamer

1 Year Ago

Actually, that's solely dependant on your personal definition of dreams, I'm very spiritual and drea.. read more
Dreams can be a mirror of life and the self and can be a portal to otherworldly dimensions. They reflect our deep experiences and desires. An excellent write. ...:))))

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Daydreamer

1 Year Ago

Thank you for describing my holy place *dreams* in such a succinct yet genius manner ❤👏👏👏.. read more
Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

Wow. You are welcome...:)................
It's surprising how it was just a couple of days ago I had been thinking about how I felt that we travel different dimensions through the different senses we possess. And how all of them superimpose one another to let us be able to fully experience this mortal reality. It's such a beautifully multi-dimensional world; while the world we visit in dreams (the literal ones) is such a contrast to it, where we have none of the senses feeding us with information, yet, dreams feel so real sometimes. Oh, I seem to have a lot to say, I hope I don't bore you. I really love this poem, ahhh. Guess what, I'm shaking my head, literally, because I just can't quote a favorite line, I can't, I'll just end up quoting your whole poem here. I absolutely admire your skillfulness, the way you create beauty through words and breathe meanings and wisdom into them. There's rhythm, lovely smooth flow and when I let your lines form images in my head, it's a great great experience. You're the queen of metaphors, haha. Then when I got to the end, I felt déjà vu and you'll see what I mean, Manal. I also have a suggestion (about some changes) to make, if you don't mind:
I have travelled through my senses
and yes, my dreams travel
all within me
*
And do keep writing my friend! :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daydreamer

1 Year Ago

You're one of the best and most flattering people who ever talked about my poetry.. your reviews are.. read more
The poem itself seems to be sprinkled with fairy dust! There are some really beautiful and ethereal images in here...as always the word choice is excellent!
Hugs! :* :* ♥♥♥♥♥

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daydreamer

1 Year Ago

Love you!❤
Dreams are always with us. Sometimes they give hope, sometimes they give pain.
These lines are so beautiful:
Visions as friends
Stars as walls
Daydreams,layers, and a million thoughts



Posted 1 Year Ago


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Daydreamer

1 Year Ago

Perhaps, but they're always a source of calmness.
Thanks so much for stopping by! 🙌💫
Shabeeh Haider

1 Year Ago

You are welcome
A plotted dream almost, takes the reader on a stroll rather than a gallop, a though provoking piece, well done. good read.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Daydreamer

1 Year Ago

Thank you very much😄
brother, those are some wise words

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Daydreamer

1 Year Ago

I'm a woman 😄
And thank you for stopping by :)
3X3MPLER

1 Year Ago

sorry for that
Daydreamer

1 Year Ago

No worries at all 😄
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mou
it is a pleasure itself, when reading it.nice work done

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Daydreamer

1 Year Ago

Oh My God😍😍
Thank you so much❤
It is nice. Very sensational. Keep it up.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Daydreamer

1 Year Ago

It's a pleasure to hear from you :)
Thanks much!
Lovely poetry as I read it stunning to the senses pleasing to the brain.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Daydreamer

1 Year Ago

This is so wonderful to know 🌸
Thank you dearly!

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