Just a love note

Just a love note

A Poem by Daydreamer
"

We all have a dark and a light side. Love will trigger both.

"
You made this
word lover
finally get
her dreams awake

packed eternities
cracked open
and spilled in fantasies

Till the shadows fall,
and the lights
shine out loud,
may we be loved

© 2017 Daydreamer



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Zoe
Lovely use of words! 'Packed eternities', 'spilled fantasies'...all results of solid imagery. You're quite the thinker. Loved it!

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Powerful words. I like that you emphasize love not just for one person or a couple but for everyone. Great writing that truly helps the reader awaken fantasies!

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love the last line...how you address this love letter to all humanity, and not just one person...we all deserve love, laughter and art...and we should fill our lives with them! :))

Posted 5 Months Ago


Very, very good poem. May the light of love shine out bright...:).....................

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daydreamer

6 Months Ago

Many thanks to you💙💪 amen to that!
Sami Khalil

6 Months Ago

::::))))).....
Love transcends all boundaries, a lovely reverie!

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daydreamer

6 Months Ago

Hope this belief will manifest💜💫

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Well, I live in an elucidation,in a moiety, in the middle of a reversible nature, between shadows of stunned truths, where nothing and everything exists. #18 years old "Female"👧 #Art lover .. more..

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