in the end

different kind of write for me; it rhymes... weird!

when did it start?

when did it all fall apart?

the lines have blurred

with hateful feelings stirred;

the bitter end has come.

 

prehaps it's been better than some,

but i falter all the same

at the mere mention of your name.

 

you, my best friend, went away,

claiming there was nothing left to say.

so here i am, all alone now

and all i can say is, wow!

never given a second chance to try,

i'm asking myself, why?

 

 

why i never saw it coming,

this awful and vile shunning.

why i never felt the death of you and me

and everything wonderful we could possibly be.

 

so many tears shed.

so many fears fed.

all my insecurities fulfilled

and my broken heart, stilled.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Wondering Mind]

A sad, sad write! And the flow is perfect. Each stanza packed with emotion.

[Roshayann D' Lyn]

Heart reanding to say the least, and yet beautiful in a dark way. You truly have the ability to express emotion so very well that it calls to memories that each of us try to burry deep within. I know I had one flash before me while reading this piece.

[Adrian K. Smith]

Wow, this was a very tough read to sit through without wanting to beat my head against my desk repeatedly. The loss of a friendship amongst other things and everything that might have been, just hits entirely too close to home with my own fears and much of my venting pieces that have popped up over time. The complete severing of ties is so heart wrenching and devastating it just feels like getting kicked while you are already down... if I had not spent so much time being teary eyed for so long now, I probably would have cried here - as is, I feel my eyes cramping - as they try - almost like dry retching... it is so painful.

[Angel Baby]

Such a sad and emotional write, brought tears to my eyes while reading it. Having a friendship fade away is never easy. I wish you all the best.