this

this is my movie

this sky blues

for me

though maybe I am

dead already

as I wait for news from

the other side

Reviews

[...]

the sky that blues for you
is on your side
and what's on your side
is all yours
blues, greens et al

[.]

no ...this is my movie...

[Robin]

maybe , maybe

[Emily B]

oh, you are not, not if you see the blue sky

[Siddhartha]

chained in the purgatory, everything seems gray. what torment, my friend...

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

seen~ seen in every bend of smoky shadow~

[Ed Hart]

what other side

[Isolophobe]

ah and i miss the simple procedural transcendence you submit our attentive little eyes to witness. i think what i've said about how monumentally attesting to moments your words are can only be furthered by saying they are the perennial child of what moment they detail.

[arbitrary jane]

this sky blues for me.

good stuff.

[Alicante lullaby]

the other side intrigues me.