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A Poem by Jessi Webb =)

My heart longs and aches to be with you

 

I lay in my bed at night,

 

Crying about something that happend during the day,

 

Then your face pops into my head,

 

And I smile through the tears,

 

And I know everything will be ok,

 

You are mine forever and always.

 

My love for you goes far beyond understanding,

 

And I feel for you like I have never felt about anyone before .

© 2009 Jessi Webb =)


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I like the part about smiling through your tears. Its a good way to symbolize happiness.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I like it! I like the part about smilig through your tears.... Yes my poem is about Zack is urs about Brady????

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Its a really emotional poem.

But its also kinda cute.

Great work :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was a very sweet poem, to tell you the truth. I really liked it. :]
Keep up the great work!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Aw, this was so awesome! Romantic, with plenty of heart and soul into this. Indeed, love, being in love, and being loved, is quite a feeling. Excellent job with this :)

B.A.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice poem...you can feel how real it is.

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Very touching.
Love the emotion.
I have no complaint on this poem..
Love it!

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is ultra-sweet. It makes me feel very warm and fuzzy. Reminds me of puppy love as I experienced it. Good job! :-)

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Jessi Webb =)
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Hey peoples ! My name is Jessi Webb, and I am a 12 year old girl . I am a young aspiring author . I believe that you are never really too young or too old to be an author . I believe that the true mea.. more..

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