Saturated with the Blues

The rain beats down

Pelting the soul

Liquid fingers take control

Droplets spread 

Vining through the heart

Reigning Supreme

Smother the sunshine

Black storm clouds

Are on the rise

The heart feels heavy

Saturated with the blues

Overtaking all other hues

The mind feels numb

As the rain seeps in

And the cycle begins again

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Love this
I have the blues
Too x

[Poetic Beauty]

We all have those moments of feeling blue.

[Melissa Kester]

This is very beautiful. It definitely hits a mark for me. Very well done. Thank you for sharing

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. Hang in there it does get better not perfect but better.

[JC]

like an old blues song, gets right to the soul.

[Poetic Beauty]

Everyone feels the blues at some time in their life

[Pax Analog]

Lucid and apt immersion in the inner weather of the blues; always intriguing to note the mesh of inner and outer weather.

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you for your kind word. The blues is something no one is immune to.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

This was well crafted, I feel that many of us can relate to this poem!

[KAREN]

Awesome imagery and deep emotions!

[Tina Kline]

I get the strong feeling of sadness and depression in your words.
The imagery in this is fantastic.
Nicely done poem - I enjoyed reading it.

[Shaquana Adams]

I love the rain imagery. Nicely penned!
-QuanaWana

[Aehr]

I love the title, its very unique and intriguing. It made me curious what the poem is about. The third stanza portrays the transition well. The flow of the poem is beautiful, all changes with the words falling perfectly into place. I think your choice of words is very clever here. Good job. Keep writing. Xx.

[Ruth]

Does seem a vicious one at times - lovely flow darlin and I felt the heaviness, sending you a sunbeam x