Drops of Moonlight.

just a poem i wrote.

drops of moonlight...

beauty. mingling with her own,

from a foggy moon

that hangs lazy in the sky.

 

pale skin, tender

that almost seems to glow,

and eyes that sparkle

with the light of youth,

of love.

 

holding her

in comforting warmth,

i know that this is right.

 

forever we will be

beneath the misty stars

and bathing

in those pristine drops

of moonlight...

Author's Note

critique is welcome. (:

Reviews

[WriterMe]

Oh i love the title. Drops of moonlight. It has such a light, picturesque ring to it.
You poem was so beautiful =]. It made me think of a young girl bathing beneath the silver light of the moon, stretched out on her back and gazing up towards the dots of light, we call stars. What a breath taking scene. Absolutely lovely =]

[Philomela Titania Lanx]

Thank you so much for this. My friend Danny will love it so so much!! ^u^

[Nix]

I absoulutely love this... words that spring from to mind - glowing, shimmering, bathing, beautiful!! You sparked imagination in the most gentle way. ~ Nix

[Angel's Lady]

Very beautiful, very poetically written as well. *sigh*