Untitled

Untitled

A Poem by revalatia
"

Something different

"

..And while stepping through his looking glass

      A view askew was he

She walked him to a mirror asking

     What it was he sees?
'Another me? Another being perhaps?

.....a myth? a lie? a lore?

Come a little closer

      and the truth we shall explore.'

Nodding at her escort,

      she grasped upon his hand,

they continued on their journey

      walking onward in this land.

Exploring trees and evergreens

     ignoring ever rising sands.

..But every now and then

     she thought the landscape looked unclear.

In the pit of unthought thoughts

      arose the slightest gleam of fear.


© 2017 revalatia



My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

¡Bri-llan-te! Grand imagery, great musicality, overall brilliance! Well done!

Posted 11 Months Ago


I enjoyed this poem. A feel of the Dante inferno tale. I liked the journey and the thoughts in the poetry. The poem had a personal feel to the words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote


Posted 1 Year Ago


This connects into the human nature so well, we see things that unsettle us but we ignore it because we are, for the time being, happy doing what we are doing. Well written :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

180 Views
3 Reviews
Rating
Added on April 26, 2017
Last Updated on April 26, 2017

Author

revalatia
revalatia

Azusa, CA



About
Thoughts in motion..words spiraling inside me.. more to come.................................later....In the meantime.. My own moment of clarity.. was realizing repeating the same mistakes over and ov.. more..

Writing
Beeware.. Beeware..

A Poem by revalatia



Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


Pieces Pieces

A Poem by Bluest Blue