FAT. What a fun word.

FAT. What a fun word.

A Poem by Rhea752

I don't believe I'm really here
And if I were I'd disappear 
A dream is where I really am
A place where I don't weigh a gram
Light as a feather floating through the air
I'm in a place where nobody stares

© 2013 Rhea752


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Interesting dramatic weird all in one 😀

Posted 3 Years Ago


I like how it is simple, short and sweet. It's nice that it rhymes. For me, the title doesn't really fit the poem. It does for the fourth line, but when I read the title, I thought it would be more expanded from the title. Take Care! Stay Strong! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


I've been in this place before, despite the common misconception that men suffer not from eating disorders or self hatred involving weight. Keep your chin up, lady, you're much better than you treat yourself.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhea752

11 Years Ago

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Rhea752
Rhea752

Middle Of My Daydreams, FL



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I am a 15 year old girl who loves to read, write, act, and draw. I just started writing seriously about 2 years ago. I've been published a few times in small online magazines. I am trying to find out .. more..

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