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Aware

A Poem by Sami Khalil
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A romance poem...A sort of a love letter...

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Aware/……………………By Sami Khalil

A romance poem…

The Poem:


Dancing with vim and vigor,

Long before stars' dim flicker

And the leaves that wither...

Long before the winnowing

Of the wind across soul-scented

Barns and old plowed fields…

Long before our silent questions

Became aware of potentiality

And their scattered companions (answers)…

Conversely, it was “just us”,

Painted in the sheen's of love prompt,

With poignant looks at life and laughter.

Long before roots remember

soil’s drifted fragrances,

Or the five senses of the truest form,

Away from all common places.

Long before wishful thinking,

Merit and demerit,

Even instruments knowing their plectrums;

I read your eyes! I fathomed the silence we spoke constantly!

I loved you! 














© 2014 Sami Khalil



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vivid and heartfelt emotions splashed on the page with a sprinkiling of rhyme to make it tasty! Gorgeous oil artwork to accompany your romantic words, Sami. I liked it. Lydi**

Posted 4 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

4 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you too dear poet for this gorgeous review and kindness. So glad you like them and enjoye.. read more
Long before wishful thinking,
Merit and demerit,
Even instruments knowing their plectrums;
I read your eyes! I fathomed the silence we spoke constantly!
I loved you!
these last lines are so vivid and romantic , very beautiful Sami

Posted 4 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

4 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much Latifa for this lovely review and kind visit. I'm pleased you like it...:)..... read more
╰☆╮So many brilliant lines here, Sami. I really enjoyed this. Your work is always a pleasure to read. ^-^╰☆╮

Posted 4 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

4 Years Ago

Wow. So many thanks here for you and your wonderful friendship. Grazie Mille...:)..................... read more
Awww Sami what a delightfully romantic poem... I could feel as I read the way you saw and appreciated her (and she you). It was a treat to read these lines: "Long before our silent questions
Became aware of potentiality
And their scattered companions (answers)…" I know how this feels or this single line: "Painted in the sheen's of love prompt,"... You have a romantic's heart Sami..
~~redzone

Posted 4 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

4 Years Ago

Wow. I'm honored to hear this from the master of romance and realism. So glad you like this touching.. read more
we don't need measuring devices, we don't need answers ....the question gets answered way before any of that...it is that "i love you"---i just know it...i feel it...
the silence contains most answers....we just have to look into ourselves...know ourselves, know what we want, and whom we love.

jacob

Posted 4 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

4 Years Ago

Wow. So true and well said. You have nailed it on the head brilliant poet. So thankful for the time .. read more
The pictures have the image similar to the one my mind conjured as I read your poem...poems about love are for me, are the most adored and the subject we like to write about as much as being engaged in. This poem is seductive in everyway.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

4 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much Shirlena for this amazing review and kind words. So glad to know you prefer t.. read more
Beautiful imagery allows the reader to read a poet's heart here, Sami.
"I fathomed the silence we spoke constantly..." Great line!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

4 Years Ago

Wow. So thankful beloved poet for this lovely review and kind words. I'm pleased when my friends and.. read more
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Amy
"I read your eyes! I fathomed the silence we spoke constantly!" I find that part intriguing. not much words need to be said. great piece!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

4 Years Ago

Wow. So wonderful from you Amy to visit and share your joy. Many and many thank yous for all...:)..... read more
Was a pleasure to read I truly enjoyed this read.

Thank you for your lovely review you
left on my page.


I loved these stanza's lines here.



Even instruments knowing their plectrums;

I read your eyes! I fathomed the silence we spoke constantly!

I loved you!




You crafted this piece very well.



Blessings. Benita / Kindred poet



Posted 4 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

4 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much dear poet for this amazing review and kind words. You are appreciated..:)...... read more
Benita c Staebelll - KindredPoet

4 Years Ago

It's a pleasure you're quite welcome. Blessings. Benita / Kindred poet

Sami Khalil

4 Years Ago

:)........
This was pure beautiful imagery! I absolutely loved it! The image was vivid and alive. Really great job Sami! :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

4 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you beloved poet for this wonderful review and kind words. All appreciated...:)....

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