Candy Cane Stripper With Sword~

~ helliday senryu written last year for the AntiClaus and Senryu Group~if you got no sense of humor don't click~ republished by request of my sik friends~ lol =P

Candy cane stripper

Mistletoe, I eat your face

Lick my lolli, pinch!

 

 

 

 

copyright: *raises hand and hides behind Blitzen's weed stash*

 

ALL RIGHTS Perverse

Reviews

[David W Moore III]

Talk about coinkidinks... The ad at the top of the page rightnow is for hand made swords!
Now on to this fine example of senru form. The complexity layered into this 5-7-5 is mind boggling. There's the social commentary, the political statement, and of course the autobiographical story of the candy stripper is totally endearing. I'm thoroughly amazed that you were able to slip in the comment about global warming and the hypocrisy of the protesting of Elizabeth Edward's funeral. Then there was the weaving of ancient Japanese mythology... Breathtaking. The goddess lolly to be licked? Genius. I'm not sure I wouldve had the conjure to call out Plato like you so obviously did here, but he'll, he's dead, how hard can he hit back? Right? This poem puts you in the league of Ralph Waldo limericson, Percy Helly, and Lord Bygones. Great job!

[Linear]

YOU want i should lick your lolli! is that a metaphor lol

[MuSe Ampoule]

Love the addition of the picture to the piece...def gives it more meaning!

Wait...is you flippin us the bird??? LOL

[David W Moore III]

Hell not he'll

[Liza]

witty and sassy

[luciddreamer]

Thanks for the laugh....oh boy will I have a vision in my head the rest of the day....lol

[Amy Bumpas]

Reminds me of a naughty stripper teasing Santa....lol

[C]

Bwahahahahaha!

[Brad]

bahahahahahahahahahahhahaahhahahahahahahahahahahah....oh sh...hahahahahhahahahahaha

you are sooooooooooo evil....mmm

[Sean M. Addams]

lol ..very funny and dark but you did great love the humor