Negative Nancy

rough draft

Negative Nancy

(Poem by Serenus)

 

Negative Nancy and I

Once had an encounter

We met through her best friend

Her name was Debbie Downer

 

It was their teacher Miss Misery

That taught them both-

When entertaining company

You have to know how to host

 

So, into their circle

-They invited me

And I accepted the invitation

-With naivety

 

Every time they were around

I found myself feeling down

Every suggestion I had

-Was picked a part, and met with

An unforgiving frown

 

I knew that this

Depressing cycle had to end

So I went on a search

For new friends

 

I finally found a few good ones

And they brought my mind some peace

But Negative Nancy didn’t like it

So that’s when she confronted me

 

She said…

She didn’t like

"That I was holding hands

With Positive Pam"

And she warned me

"Don’t be seduced

By Supportive Suzanne"

 

She left me confused…

Who was she

To tell me

What to do?

 

Then

I began to realize

Nancy’s sinister plan

She wanted me for herself

And no one else stood a chance

 

She drew a line in the sand

She told me that "I had to choose"

I said “Nancy, I’m not your man”

She looked shocked, like this was news

 

I told her "maybe if she wasn’t so busy

Putting other people down

She would probably be happy

And have uplifting friends

That would stick around"

 

I told her, "she’s not the one for me

And that is very true…"

She said, she "refuses to change her ways"

And she’s "comfortable with her negative view"

 

I said" OK, that’s fine

But with that attitude

You will forever be alone...

Just take a good look around

Even Debbie Downer is gone…"

 

Author's Note

this is kinda rough,,, will make changes soon

tell me what u think

Reviews

[Myenigma]

hahaha good write

[Sirius King]

thanx :-)

[Sunny Skye]

Nicely done! I like the flow and the names :P really good stuff.
Good Job!

-SkyeBlanco

[Sirius King]

lol thanx :-)

[Sethnicity]

Dope! I'm reeling what you feeling... keep it going the sounds appealing!

[Sirius King]

lol thanx man!

[David the writer]

Dude, you're such a sillynanny fir even going near negative nancy, and debbie downer! lol XD good poem, not just how you feel

[Sirius King]

lol true true lol
thanx man!

[Steven Cash]

Nice nice

love all the names lol XDDD

[Sirius King]

thanx lol,,,

All of the names
used in this poem
are Real people
and their Real names were used! lol

[Westminster Abbey]

I'm glad that this is out there. It's good to be postive :)

Nice write! 100/100

[Sirius King]

very true, its waay too much negativity out there.

thanx for checking it out! :-)