chaotic mess

Earth entangled in the chaotic mess,

Where men had dismally failed to listen,

To the eternal winsomeness of nature,

As flaws are reiterated by humans,

Threat peeks into our children’s future,

The things destructed may sound history,

Will be known only when reading our past,

Our eyes blinds as we glower at future,

Detriment to mother nature we’ve cast,

Ponder, before books can only show ‘em.

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AWARDS/BADGES WON

Gold Star

Jul 21, 2012

• Albert's BLUE ROSE Poetry Cafe TOVLI'S TEN Revisited " Ten for Ten"
• chaotic mess

Reviews

[Ashly Christen]

and people wonder why things keep going wrong, because they failed to listen to the eternal winsomeness of nature, so true, I wish that was something that everyone knew, very nice

[Tina Kline]

This paints a very sad condition. One can only hope this sort of destruction stops without adding heavy and destructive burdens to the people already here. No one should be made to suffer. A really good poem!

[Wolf's Dark Song]

So much that humans do is good but so much more is not. The human heart can be dead in so many in the face of greed and power. You did a wonderful job on this poem.

[An owl on the moon]

What a haunting vision of earth undone... desecrated by our whims of abandon... looking back at was, and wishing the world could have been spared our hunger. Powerful.

[MOON]

Absolutely lovely write and content deep.

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Well Written

[emmajoy]

Brilliantly used words, and, what's more, your poem makes moral comment on issues that need to be highlighted. Who knows what we'll leave, tis a frightening thought.

Thank you, blessings and gentle hugs.

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful poem. The poem tell a sad story. You would think. Our leaders would study history and find the right answers. The past is repeated and men keep leading us to a deeper hole. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Shalini Dinesh (Poet's World)]

Thank you so much for the review..

[joshua deathdealer]

Excellent piece. The wording is well done.

[Shalini Dinesh (Poet's World)]

Thank you so much for the review..

[Helena]

This is an outstanding and a superb use of the "ten". I loved the subject matter. Well done! Thank you for submitting this to the contest!

[Shalini Dinesh (Poet's World)]

thank you so much for your valuable comment!!!