Sweetest Girl

A Friend o'mine

'so dark is this world, so cold
yet she shines brighlty above
eternal light that shines upon her
from heaven itself, flawless soul'

she is human, kind and passionate
untouched by civilization, so pure
the bliss of her smile sends ripples
through the essence of love itself

she is only a girl, yet so wise
her judgment rational and just
she is the aura of happiness
her voice enthralling, healing

she is all alone, yet so happy
she blinds the darkness with light
she is the hope of a million hearts
her face so beautiful, sweetest smile

'her every step to right the wrong
i hear her soul love through a song
my wings may break but i will go
to seek the soul with eternal glow'

Reviews

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. wow, that's beautiful ... i hope you shared this beautiful ode with her ...

[WriterMe]

I don't know why, but I imagine some sort of gorgeous descending angel when I read this.A very optimistic write. Most of your words have a positive note, so you cant help but smile while reading it. =]
I really like this. Cant say more without sounding like a psychologist, you know what I mean. So, I shall reserve more comments for another day.

[deeps]

'so dark is this world, so cold
yet she shines brighlty above
eternal light that shines upon her
from heaven itself, flawless soul'

I really enjoyed this stanza here,
This is a wonderful write, awesome flow and rhyme scheme.