Undeniable

Undeniable

A Poem by C.C. Marx
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Just a little something for a someone :)

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Coating my ears with your seductive words
Flirting constantly with my emotions
Coaxing and tempting
How easy I fall prey to you.

The very aroma in which you carry
Decreases my brain cell count
Dulls the senses
Or maybe just the common sense.

Your smirking smile
Can melt a cold girl's heart
Torch the ice that encompasses it
And vulnerablize her soul.

Deliciously addictive your eyes are
One wink has you hooked
Each glance has you running back
Just wanting more and more.

Wrapped around your finger
Had my heart tied in knots
Just one dose of you
And I was a goner.



© 2013 C.C. Marx



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The first green grass of spring will melt the coolest body ,Now a heart, those have weight of their own...

Posted 4 Years Ago


Oh man...I know him so well ;-) This is exceptional...

Posted 4 Years Ago


C.C. Marx

4 Years Ago

Amen to that, thanks for the review!
KAOlmsted

4 Years Ago

Always my pleasure...
"The very aroma in which you carry
Decreases my brain cell count
Dulls the senses
Or maybe just the common sense.

Your smirking smile
Can melt a cold girl's heart
Torch the ice that encompasses it
And vulnerablize her soul. "
That is some good poetry...Thank you for sharing...:)

Posted 4 Years Ago


C.C. Marx

4 Years Ago

Thank you for reviewing!! :)
Sami Khalil

4 Years Ago

My pleasure...:)
This is mind blowing awesome :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


C.C. Marx

4 Years Ago

Aww thanks girl :)
Lover Of Words

4 Years Ago

Your welcome girl
The imagination has traveled miles with someone and I guess you are enjoying the journey. Nice one...!!!

Posted 4 Years Ago


C.C. Marx

4 Years Ago

I dunno if enjoying is the right word we will see how it goes thanks for the review
Kanishk Upadhyaya

4 Years Ago

Hmmmm, well in that case I would say, I enjoy the painful absence of someone special and so I write... read more
C.C. Marx

4 Years Ago

We all have our muses
Many can relate to ur words, nice work :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Sam Gregory

4 Years Ago

I think its great to be able to relate to situations, even if they're bad ones. It all builds unders.. read more
C.C. Marx

4 Years Ago

Good point no Witty comments for that
Sam Gregory

4 Years Ago

*Nods head* lol
*sigh*.....i've met a few men like this. Fantastic poem...I love it!!

Posted 4 Years Ago


C.C. Marx

4 Years Ago

Goodness me that lady is starting a trend, don't be surprised if someday on twitter you see #fookedu.. read more
redflutterby

4 Years Ago

Fooking exactly!!!
C.C. Marx

4 Years Ago

Fookalicious :p
This was really great, nice job :D

Posted 4 Years Ago


C.C. Marx

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much for reviewing :)
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Aly
LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted 4 Years Ago


C.C. Marx

4 Years Ago

Thanks aly!! Remember who helped me get it on here :)
Aly

4 Years Ago

:) :) :) mm-hmm
Ahhh, somebody's been enticed. Nice one...lots of great lines.

'vulnerablize her soul'

Ha, is that even a word, it works nonetheless! Kudos.

Posted 4 Years Ago


C.C. Marx

4 Years Ago

Probably not though, it was midnight and it sounded good to me. Entinced is a good word for it, than.. read more
Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Ha I liked it....we're allowed to take poetic license once in a while, especially if it works! My p.. read more

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