Committed By Society

1-31-2011 [Lyrics For A Tune Written For The Band NEW ASYLUM......as I am co-writing some songs with Jude who is in it]....THIS is all my own though...

Come on in, Have a seat, Take a drink, Let me speak.....

This world divine,
These padded walls,
You're safe in here,
These hallowed halls

Know your bounds,
Here there are none,
Begin to dance,
Let's have some fun

Come on in, Have a seat, Take a Drink, Let me speak.....

You'll take this pill,
Oh swallow it whole
No bitter taste,
Wanting more, here's the bowl

Hearing things again,
Melodic in a way
Now here's the music my friend,
Let's watch your zombie sway

Come on in, Have a Seat, Take a Drink, Let Me Speak......

You are feeling rather numb,
You now know why you are here
Society labeled you out of fear,
Come stay here in the New Asylum

You're now here, I lock the door, Four padded walls, You'll hurt no more....

Copyright 1-31-2011 Stacy Perry

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I feel like I need a padded room sometime. A very strong story in your poem. The problems of this world can drive us crazy sometimes. A very good ending to a excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Wooddawg]

love this!!!! awesome job!

[Fallacy Pharmacy]

Amazing, just wow! Already resting in my favourites :)

[Sean M. Addams]

I like this very deep and creative .. overall I thought you expressed this one well..great job..

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a creative way to show how society labels people with metal illness. This is a great eye opening write. I use to work as a CNA at a home for the mentally handicapped. It was hard but rewarding job.

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Cool yaa..!!!!! Superb..!!!!

CHEERS..!!!

KEEP WRITING..!!!

KEEP SHARING..!!!!

MAY GOD BLESS..!!!

[D S Rollins]

Wow I like, Can definitely hear this as a song.