You Are Mine!

Free verse

You are mine!

Beauty …
comes when I rest,
the moment
I close my eyes.

Each breath taken, 
softly releasing … 
sweet whispers
of a sigh. 

While pleasing visions
meander through the
flowing meadows
of your love,
I lie upon
a billowed bed, 
warmed by mem'ries
of your touch.

Anticipation soars
into flight, 
longings lend
to desire …
like dreamers
wishing beneath stars, 
your passions
fuel my fire.

Oh,
in this moment,
rises such beauty,
when you float across
my mind;

sweet whispers
of a sigh,
knowing …

You are mine! 

Author's Note

My very first free Verse poetry. Thank you to Richard W. Jenkins for you continued support and encouragement! A very gifted poetic and very patient teacher! :-)

Reviews

[Relic]

I's always a pleasure to read your poetry.

[Susan 🦋]

Aw Thank you so much!

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Hummmm - sweet everything poetically emotional and mystical - loved it... :-)

[Susan 🦋]

Yummy review! Thank you :-)

[Pete]

sweet, beautiful & lovely. such deep, yearning writing almost reads itself. :)

[Susan 🦋]

Hey Pete! thanks for the sweet review...I appreciate you taking the time to read/review. :-)))

[MAC]

this is simply beautiful :)

[Susan 🦋]

Aw I need a sweet review! Working on another poem at the moment...you made me smile:-) Thank you!

[kitty]

Embracing. Captivating words. Positive vibes directed at a sweetheart/lover. Keep up the good work. You are getting straight to your readers.

[Susan 🦋]

What a sweet review! Thank you so much for taking the time to read! I do appreciate it!

[kitty]

My pleasure!

[lightsong]

My Sir Richard has recommended You to me, telling me that I will enjoy Your poetry, oh! He was wrong! I LOVE Your poetry, it's the first poem I read from You, and I just fell in love with Your pen, I feel its essence and I simply adore it, and I know in all Your poems, this essence will be there, Your poem is like a magical spell, beautiful, tender, dreamy, embrace one's heart with great deal of wamth and gentleness, fly us into splendour... yes! PERFECTION! glad I found You :)

[Susan 🦋]

Omgoodness! This review is better than the poem! I am smiling!!..Thank you for such kind words! yes, Richard, he spoils me. :-) Thanks for stopping by...you made my day!

[KCthelastboyscout]

This is a beautiful dream.thank you for sharing it with us.Describing this love in just a few words is remarkable.a pleasure to read

[Susan 🦋]

Thank you for reading and for this sweet review! I do appreciate it!

[Richard🖌]

Oh-MY, Susan!
You do me so proud with this amazingly beautiful and heart fetching Free Verse (your very first), I know took you much effort in spreading your wings to find the right moments to release these wondrously rendered words from your heart and fertile imagination.
Every guy is going to wish they were written to him, and who could blame them! ; )
Your picture choice and presentation are, almost, as breathtaking as your poem.
Your potential poetical skills are virtually limitless. I am so very proud of you, Susan, and can barely wait for your next Free Verse.

Thank you humbly, too, for the honorable mention.
Warmest hugs 'n blessings! ⁓ Richard : )

200/100 A+++

[Susan 🦋]

A+++ ? Happy dance!!!.. and a few happy tears!..this review is tugging at the heart. :-) Thank you Richard.

[Richard🖌]

Susan,
You deserve much more than my meager words for all your hard work, and for tolerating my endless pushing, poking, prodding, and persistent … LOL!

[Susan 🦋]

Oh yes! that's right! ;-) I want a shiny star sticker too.

[Richard🖌]

🌟 ✨ 🌟 ✨ 🌟 ✨ 🌟

[Susan 🦋]

Life is good. :-)

[William Liston]

Wow. This poem's so great it's hard to believe it's your first attempt at free verse : )
I love how deeply and strongly your expressions of warmth, tenderness, and dream-like passion emanate from your words. I've read this poem three times, and after each reading, I couldn't help but become more and more entranced by how perfectly crafted and heart-warming your words were. I also enjoyed the sound of this piece, with the smooth, lilting flow and the little moments of alliteration ("billowed bed," "longings lend," "fuel my fire"). The visual presentation is gorgeous, and I love how your last line lets the piece resonate. Excellent work, Susan!

- William Liston

[Susan 🦋]

Well look at this lovely review!! thank you so much!I've been writing just over a year...some wonderful people on Fanstory ( another site) taught/tried to teacher me meter..and well, heck..just about poetry in general. Richard Jenkins..though has taught me the most by far. ( wonderful poet on this site) actually, he has the patience to teach and encourage..He seems to think I can write free Verse. I tend to like the traditional forms...due to the strict rules and such. Anyways, so glad you enjoyed this!!