Key To My Heart

broken hearted confusion

Help me i keep falling through the barrier,

I'm looking for the key and you are the carrier,

Please open this and unleash me from the pain,

I'm lost in engagment and my thoughts have been slane,

No amuzment but i guess that's your point,

You circulate my blood flow connecting to my joints,

I tested my luck by testing your patience,

This is the truth with no exagerations,

You made me a whole, I'm paying my tolls,

My heart was once full,

And everytime i think about it you were my goal,

And when we are with each other i feel as if im strangled,

My love which was superior to the rest,

Heart broken ripping through the flesh,

Beating so hard its heard outside my chest,

And yes, i confess, there is nothing left,

From the final break in from your loving theft,

I was left to corress and left in my mess,

Gods hardest test but yet i am blessed,

Cuz i can't believe i was exepted by a godess,

Plus you kept to being modest,

Though even still you are the hottest,

So you kept me holding desire,

You n me together made me complete and entire,

So listen mi amora, my senora,

I'm left with a picture that continues to reform yuh,

Im left in pain and this is how i morn yuh,

You cought me in this cornuh,

Baby i adore yuh,

Left my life and i wish that you were in it,

Never left so lonely i wish that it would finish,

The darkness is so grimish, made by the feelings that diminished,

I miss you baby doll so look me in the eyes,

The only notion to ever make me cry,

I just want to die, no need to try,

You left me for this guy, you left me as denied,

So hey yeah i was much abliged,

Let these emotions be your guide, listen i have tried,

All i ever wanted was you forever on my side,

I'll miss you for always my life defining pride....

Reviews

[deeps]

WOW this is amazing and so emotional as well.
Very well written and flows wonderful.

[vukcic]

You have talent; I just wish you'd apply it to less cliche themes.

[Sam Severn]

Out-f*****g-standing poem! I love the opening rhymes...in fact, all your rhymes are STELLAR! ㋡

[Amaunet]

nice piece, i like how you managed to capture both love4 and loss, and joy and pain all at the same time

[MagiCrystal]

A good choice of words.. but... you could edit and used your words careful.. poetry ha!