Courts of your Love

Courts of your Love

A Poem by boygene borice
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I believe in true love, because that's what builds me up Get more of my work on https://www.smashwords.com/profile/view/theMiracle

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There is no place I have found,

With peace undisturbed and eternal,

With so much fragrance and splendor,

Like the courts of your love.

 

Like the wine taken in the evening in the Kings Palace,

So is your love upon my being,

It flows serenely,

Moving me swiftly in atmosphere of ataraxia.

 

Like a flower christened with morning dew,

So has your love replenished my soul,

Furnished me with vitality to move forward,

Like a dedicated Zulu hunter.

 

Like a flower bud guarded by the petals,

To give it a soft and tender luster,

So has your love been holding me,

Modified me into a man I’m purposed to be.

 

Your bosom is like verdure of the meadows in June,

Lulled with greenness of affection,

I have found comfort by laying down,

In that field of your bosom my Love.

 

There is resplendence,

In the courts of your love.

 

© Dec, 2016, Boygene Borice


© 2017 boygene borice



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boygene borice
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With the dedication of the Zulu hunter, I was dedicated to the first and end lines of your work right off the bat... Fantastic rhyme schemes that leave thoughts flowing smoothly... Your word choice is stellar, as well, and has an almost royal feel to it... Elegantly penned...

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

boygene borice

7 Months Ago

Thank you for these kind and honorable words :)
Silente

7 Months Ago

You are welcome, I was honored to read such a work... Not all rhymes are end rhymes...
boygene borice

7 Months Ago

Thank you. Pleasure :)



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This intense loving piece could easily become a song....sublime and loving you are Boygene...every poem is another lighted window into your soul...BRAVO

Posted 7 Months Ago


With the dedication of the Zulu hunter, I was dedicated to the first and end lines of your work right off the bat... Fantastic rhyme schemes that leave thoughts flowing smoothly... Your word choice is stellar, as well, and has an almost royal feel to it... Elegantly penned...

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

boygene borice

7 Months Ago

Thank you for these kind and honorable words :)
Silente

7 Months Ago

You are welcome, I was honored to read such a work... Not all rhymes are end rhymes...
boygene borice

7 Months Ago

Thank you. Pleasure :)
I feel like such a pedant for saying this but the line concerning the bud and the petals irked a little boygene. The amateur horticulturalist was screaming the anatomy of flowers which is totally my flaw not a flaw in this beauty of a poem. So many images which made me feel fuzzy and the word ataraxia - well, what can I say ... awesome.
Well penned dear poet.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

boygene borice

7 Months Ago

Thank you, for your review, i have learnt something from your review, next time i will know how to w.. read more
WHAT AM I?: Nephilim WHAT AM I?: Nephilim
A teen boy gets killed, but trades his soul for another chance. He changes. A girl notices the new boy with silver eyes.
I captured sheer romance and passion in your words..I love how you manipulate the words and especially your beautiful rhetoric metaphors..
brilliant!
note: great poems don't always have to rhyme but I imagine had yours rhymed it wouldve been a masterpiece.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

boygene borice

7 Months Ago

Thank you so much. I'm humbled. I will try to use rhyme in my next poems,though, when the poem comes.. read more
I liked the way the description made the places and thoughts come alive to the reader.
"Your bosom is like verdure of the meadows in June,
Lulled with greenness of affection,
I have found comfort by laying down,
In that field of your bosom my Love."
The above lines. Solid and worthwhile words for love. Thank you Boygene for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

boygene borice

7 Months Ago

I'm very humbled. thank you taking your time to review my poem. Pleasure
Coyote Poetry

7 Months Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.
I can feel love from every your word. Very nicely done.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

boygene borice

7 Months Ago

Thank you so much. i highly appreciate
This is astonishing, so very beautifully thought out and woven. Love is took to a whole new height here, stunning :)

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

boygene borice

7 Months Ago

Thank you so much. I'm truly humbled,for you taking your time to review my work :)
Very romantic and affectionate. True love is building each other and hate is tearing each other apart...Marvelous...:)..

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

boygene borice

7 Months Ago

Thank you so much. Your review has built me up :)
Sami Khalil

7 Months Ago

You are welcome...:).............
Love this one. You really have something within you. You are full of love. :)

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

boygene borice

7 Months Ago

Thank you so much. All is for God's glory
Your wordplay is amazing. It's a beautiful write, and it's clear it has come from the heart. Lovely.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

boygene borice

7 Months Ago

Thank you so much. I'm truly humbled

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